Living Among Dreams

..... As my eyes get too heavy, with the weight of each lid My dreams start to travel to where an alter me lives My head on my pillow, I am floating in clouds The sky is my ocean, where the waves sweep me out Like a sea washing up at the base of a cliff I feel ocean breezes, with the tides of ‘what-if ’… The places I visit, at the douse of the light Are dreams where I wander, in the thick of the night There is a path that meanders, that is woven with flowers Where the sun keeps on shining, no matter the hour I can lie in the sand, feel the warmth of the sun Tho’ the thunder clouds rattle my window like drums Often forgotten by morning, each place that I’ve been It is not easy by daylight...., to hold onto dreams
........ Inspired By Brian Strand's Contest: Your Pick/14 Lines
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Smith Avatar
October 27, 2011 at 1:18 PM
Another masterpiece! I enjoy the easy rhythm.
Lucas Mcclure Avatar
October 23, 2011 at 11:08 AM
Wonderful write!!! Congratulations on your win!!-----Lori
Sweetheart Avatar
October 21, 2011 at 3:37 PM
Congrats Carrie on another awesome win with this elegant poetry luv..
Quigley Avatar
October 21, 2011 at 8:56 AM
Congratulations on your win Carrie. Well written
Brown Avatar
October 21, 2011 at 6:15 AM
Congratulations on your win in Brian's "Your Pick" contest Carrie. Love, Carol
Song Avatar
October 21, 2011 at 3:14 AM
Grace! Gorgeous dreams....Amazing! Love reading your poetry, Carrie. Gwendolen
Dietrich Avatar
October 15, 2011 at 2:56 AM
boy, such an awesome writer to be able to do such a superb sonnet in addition to your skill with free verse. I expect this to place very high. I entered a sonnet too (an oldie) Luv, Andrea
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October 14, 2011 at 5:01 PM
I think your dreams are truly amazing! I wish to have dreams such as these! When I dream I remember not a thing about it when I awaken! Fabulous job Carrie!!
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