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Living on the street disheveled and beat: they're labeled abject losers, unkempt, filthy freaks without baths for weeks, street thugs and drug abusers. From homeless beggars to teen bootleggers: caring souls can feel their pain; and offer up change. An award exchange: though their paths won't cross again. So much damage done to lives stripped of fun, now forced to live on the street. Alone, without friends; no chance for amends, exposed to the cold and heat.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020




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Date: 2/20/2020 9:21:00 PM
I love the Alouette form Emile. You have done this so well. I really hope this wonderful meaningful poem is a top winner for you. xxoo
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Date: 2/21/2020 8:34:00 AM
Thanks Connie, as always I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.

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