Live On

I feel you in every deafening pause
I taste your sorrows on my open tongue
Your anxious pulse on my fingertips
I want to warm your hesitant hands
I want to reassure your quivering lips
Trace your trust into my hope's light
Till you are mighty and whole

Your sinking eyes heavy my heart's load
I think of all that you have endured 
I inwardly moan, 
I bleed profusely 
The tears enrapture my soul
I want to take all your pain away
In one pristine sweep
I implore peace to rain once more
With all her notes resounding 
Harmonious and true 
Strange and narrow
The paths to her melody await

I see you in each descending sunset
The next more somber than the last
I know your rage and your want
Your desperation in your cold smile
I wish to bring you the sun once more
To give you the faith to love
To give you the strength one needs
To live on

Galatians 6:2 – “Bear ye one another's burdens, and so fulfil the law of Christ.”
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Riley Avatar
February 25, 2018 at 2:24 AM
A truly truly, truly powerful read. Your work and spirit always inspired me. Thank you.
Michael Avatar
February 24, 2018 at 6:44 AM
A powerful write indeed...A selfless one to make another strong...Make somebody happy...Enjoyed it
Inman Avatar
February 24, 2018 at 3:26 AM
"I see you in each descending sunset" I feel this line.
Y. Avatar
February 23, 2018 at 8:36 PM
WoW! Laura, You don't post that often, but when you do it wow's me every time. Your skillful pen complimented "Galatians 6:2" very well. I am in awe of your gift:-) Alexis
Breidenthal Avatar
March 3, 2018 at 7:14 AM
Alexis, thank you for such a sweet compliment. You're very uplifting. So happy you enjoyed this piece. <3~Laura
Lamoureux Avatar
February 23, 2018 at 5:16 PM
You certainly took the scripture to heart. I am moved by this empathic write.
Breidenthal Avatar
March 3, 2018 at 7:13 AM
Thanks Richard! It was such an emotional week when I wrote this, for so many different individuals in my life. Thanks for your kind comment <3 ~Laura
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