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I feel you in every deafening pause I taste your sorrows on my open tongue Your anxious pulse on my fingertips I want to warm your hesitant hands I want to reassure your quivering lips Trace your trust into my hope's light Till you are mighty and whole Your sinking eyes heavy my heart's load I think of all that you have endured I inwardly moan, I bleed profusely The tears enrapture my soul I want to take all your pain away In one pristine sweep I implore peace to rain once more With all her notes resounding Harmonious and true Strange and narrow The paths to her melody await I see you in each descending sunset The next more somber than the last I know your rage and your want Your desperation in your cold smile I wish to bring you the sun once more To give you the faith to love To give you the strength one needs To live on Galatians 6:2 – “Bear ye one another's burdens, and so fulfil the law of Christ.”

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Date: 2/25/2018 2:24:00 AM
A truly truly, truly powerful read. Your work and spirit always inspired me. Thank you.
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Date: 2/24/2018 6:44:00 AM
A powerful write indeed...A selfless one to make another strong...Make somebody happy...Enjoyed it
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Date: 2/24/2018 3:26:00 AM
"I see you in each descending sunset" I feel this line.
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Date: 2/23/2018 8:36:00 PM
WoW! Laura, You don't post that often, but when you do it wow's me every time. Your skillful pen complimented "Galatians 6:2" very well. I am in awe of your gift:-) Alexis
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 3/3/2018 7:14:00 AM
Alexis, thank you for such a sweet compliment. You're very uplifting. So happy you enjoyed this piece. <3~Laura
Date: 2/23/2018 5:16:00 PM
You certainly took the scripture to heart. I am moved by this empathic write.
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 3/3/2018 7:13:00 AM
Thanks Richard! It was such an emotional week when I wrote this, for so many different individuals in my life. Thanks for your kind comment <3 ~Laura

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