LIVE

Live Live well my friend, and let no man omit your speech This and only this will end the flow of your stream Denying any unfold breach. Mark well my friend, and let no second interrupt your time This and only this will quickly send a moment to Eclipse untold mime. Learn good, well, my friend, bearing suppositions free This and only this will commend Proposal’s of no vanity. And there will you stand strong and tall Complete in your silent sheen This and only this will pass on that which is seen All is Whole.

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Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/29/2023 9:14:00 AM

- Congratulations on your win in the "Stoicism As Way of Life" contest...great writing, Janine :) -

Janine Lever
Date: 11/30/2023 9:38:00 AM

Hello my friend and thank you so much for your comments on my poem I appreciate them so much, as i do yourself a fellow poet. much love and peace xxxjanine

Arum Dusu

Date: 11/17/2023 2:16:00 AM

Hi, Janine... So, I haven't written any poem in a while. I think, the first line, "... let no man omit your speech..." was written to me. Thank you. Anyways, I love this poem. Great job!

Janine Lever
Date: 11/17/2023 5:51:00 AM

Hello Arum and thankyou for your comments and your gracious words. I appreciate your enjoyment of this poem, and the first line as you say is an important one and that you connected with it, is an honour to me. love and peace janinexx