Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Poet Sijo

Livable Sanctuary

Threads of sunbeams resurrecting sleepy whole breaths of existence
  Darkness fragrance afloat casting spells wakening transient death
                 Animating progress of blended livable sanctuary


(C) olive_eloisa
5:33 pm
May 04, 2014

CONTEST: SIJO IN A TEMPLE
SPONSOR: NETTE ON CLAUD
6TH PLACE

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James Fraser October 2, 2014 at 3:28 PM Sanctuary, love that word. My sanctuary would be an island in the sun, no clocks, no calendars, but most definitely Internet for Music and posting poetry, along with a tanned beauty. Oh, and a fishing rod, James :) Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser October 3, 2014 at 8:12 AM hahahha.. :D lovr the no clocks and no calendars.. :) what a relaxing scene.. :thanks Mr James.. :)

Andrea Dietrich May 15, 2014 at 9:47 PM hey, there you are again, a BELATED congrats to you, and thanks for your support at my food blogs. Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser June 10, 2014 at 2:37 PM hahhaa thanks Andrea.. :D really thanks.. :)

Aiyah Torres May 14, 2014 at 9:51 AM Congratulations on your win, sweet Eloi!!!! :O))XOXO Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser June 10, 2014 at 2:36 PM Thank much Aiyah.. :)

Michael Dom May 14, 2014 at 7:27 AM a mystical write, olive. that last line sure is enigmatic. Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser June 10, 2014 at 2:34 PM Thank you mIchael.. :) Congratulations as well.. :)

Poet Destroyer A May 13, 2014 at 1:29 PM OLIVE , Congratulations, in NETTE's, "SIJO IN A TEMPLE " awesome contest. <3 Love * LINDA Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser May 13, 2014 at 5:15 PM Thanks Linda..:) appreciate it much..:)

Nette Onclaud May 13, 2014 at 1:00 PM delivered with as much introspection and grace as anything you've written,olive.. sweet cheers on your award in m contest. huggs.. galeng! Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser May 13, 2014 at 5:14 PM Thanks much Nette..:) Hugs

Dr. Upma A. Sharma May 13, 2014 at 7:57 AM Beautiful write Olive,, magical words,, great sijo ! Congrats on big win! Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser May 13, 2014 at 5:00 PM Thanks much dr. Upma

Ivor Kos May 12, 2014 at 10:36 PM Conratulations Olive_eloi:) // ivo Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser May 13, 2014 at 2:43 AM Thanks much Ivo..:) GBU

Dr.Ram Mehta May 12, 2014 at 9:08 PM Impressive imagery..Congratulations on the win, olive Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser May 13, 2014 at 4:58 PM Thanks much dr. Ram :) glad you like it GBU

Paul Callus May 12, 2014 at 3:28 PM Conratulations Olive_eloi:) // paul Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser May 13, 2014 at 2:42 AM Thank much dearie Paul..:) GBU

Lisa Lee May 12, 2014 at 2:21 PM Olive, Awesome Work Here! Congratulations on your win! Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser May 13, 2014 at 4:57 PM Thanks much Lisa..:)

Jake Ponce May 6, 2014 at 11:25 PM Though its entirety is awesome, I especially loved the second line of your Sijo, Olive. \m/ Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser May 7, 2014 at 3:03 AM Thank you much Jake, Im glad with your visit.. :)

Sara Kendrick May 5, 2014 at 9:11 AM Mornings good and bad but mostly good.. Enjoyed reading your creative and expressive work..Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser May 5, 2014 at 10:32 AM Thanks Sara.. :) I was caught by those clouds you created .. Heavenly ..

Aiyah Torres May 5, 2014 at 8:51 AM "just a try"... but this one is a winner piece, my dear!! ..great write ...awesome lines!!! :O)) gl in nette's contest.. ^_^ Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser May 5, 2014 at 10:31 AM Thanks Aiyah am not an expector though.. ;) try and try as nothing to lose anyway..:)

Monterey Sirak May 5, 2014 at 7:33 AM Every image you have penned here is stunning. You are a wonder! Thank you for your visit to my poetry. Your comments are always as uplifting as your smile. Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser May 5, 2014 at 10:28 AM Oh thanks much Monterey..:) as your smile too I wonder who brought that one lively cheerful smile. In your pic..:) hugs much..:)

Shadow Hamilton May 5, 2014 at 6:58 AM very good pen Olive gl in contest ty for visiting my page hugs Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser May 5, 2014 at 10:24 AM Thank you Shadow..:) was actually caught up in ante with your catchy titles that it lured me to read them :) and it's good I did :) olive here..:)

Paul Callus May 4, 2014 at 4:43 PM threads of sunbeams...fragrance afloat...etc are phrases that make an impact. lovely sijo; deep read. gl in contest. // paul Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser May 4, 2014 at 4:52 PM Weee again Paul just a try..:) thanks much..God bless you and all of us ..:D! Hurray!!

Amy Green May 4, 2014 at 9:45 AM Oooh, that's really nice. Liked a lot Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser May 4, 2014 at 4:51 PM Thank you for the visit Amy..:) have a great day ahead..:)