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LIVABLE SANCTUARY

Threads of sunbeams resurrecting sleepy whole breaths of existence Darkness fragrance afloat casting spells wakening transient death Animating progress of blended livable sanctuary (C) olive_eloisa 5:33 pm May 04, 2014 CONTEST: SIJO IN A TEMPLE SPONSOR: NETTE ON CLAUD 6TH PLACE

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Date: 10/2/2014 3:28:00 PM
Sanctuary, love that word. My sanctuary would be an island in the sun, no clocks, no calendars, but most definitely Internet for Music and posting poetry, along with a tanned beauty. Oh, and a fishing rod, James :)
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Date: 10/3/2014 8:12:00 AM
hahahha.. :D lovr the no clocks and no calendars.. :) what a relaxing scene.. :thanks Mr James.. :)
Date: 5/15/2014 9:47:00 PM
hey, there you are again, a BELATED congrats to you, and thanks for your support at my food blogs.
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Date: 6/10/2014 2:37:00 PM
hahhaa thanks Andrea.. :D really thanks.. :)
Date: 5/14/2014 9:51:00 AM
Congratulations on your win, sweet Eloi!!!! :O))XOXO
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Date: 6/10/2014 2:36:00 PM
Thank much Aiyah.. :)
Date: 5/14/2014 9:04:00 AM
Sweet Olive.. Let's frame this one, I just love it! Congrats on your win..
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Date: 6/10/2014 2:35:00 PM
hahha yalla let's frame it.. :) can you do for me Dave.. :D :P joking. :)
Date: 5/14/2014 7:27:00 AM
a mystical write, olive. that last line sure is enigmatic.
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Date: 6/10/2014 2:34:00 PM
Thank you mIchael.. :) Congratulations as well.. :)
Date: 5/13/2014 1:29:00 PM
OLIVE , Congratulations, in NETTE's, "SIJO IN A TEMPLE " awesome contest. <3 Love * LINDA
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Date: 5/13/2014 5:15:00 PM
Thanks Linda..:) appreciate it much..:)
Date: 5/13/2014 1:00:00 PM
delivered with as much introspection and grace as anything you've written,olive.. sweet cheers on your award in m contest. huggs.. galeng!
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Date: 5/13/2014 5:14:00 PM
Thanks much Nette..:) Hugs
Date: 5/13/2014 7:57:00 AM
Beautiful write Olive,, magical words,, great sijo ! Congrats on big win!
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Date: 5/13/2014 5:00:00 PM
Thanks much dr. Upma
Date: 5/12/2014 10:36:00 PM
Conratulations Olive_eloi:) // ivo
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Date: 5/13/2014 2:43:00 AM
Thanks much Ivo..:) GBU
Date: 5/12/2014 9:08:00 PM
Impressive imagery..Congratulations on the win, olive
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Date: 5/13/2014 4:58:00 PM
Thanks much dr. Ram :) glad you like it GBU
Date: 5/12/2014 3:28:00 PM
Conratulations Olive_eloi:) // paul
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Date: 5/13/2014 2:42:00 AM
Thank much dearie Paul..:) GBU
Date: 5/12/2014 2:21:00 PM
Olive, Awesome Work Here! Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 5/13/2014 4:57:00 PM
Thanks much Lisa..:)
Date: 5/6/2014 11:25:00 PM
Though its entirety is awesome, I especially loved the second line of your Sijo, Olive. \m/
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Date: 5/7/2014 3:03:00 AM
Thank you much Jake, Im glad with your visit.. :)
Date: 5/5/2014 9:11:00 AM
Mornings good and bad but mostly good.. Enjoyed reading your creative and expressive work..Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara
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Date: 5/5/2014 10:32:00 AM
Thanks Sara.. :) I was caught by those clouds you created .. Heavenly ..
Date: 5/5/2014 8:51:00 AM
"just a try"... but this one is a winner piece, my dear!! ..great write ...awesome lines!!! :O)) gl in nette's contest.. ^_^
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Date: 5/5/2014 10:31:00 AM
Thanks Aiyah am not an expector though.. ;) try and try as nothing to lose anyway..:)
Date: 5/5/2014 7:33:00 AM
Every image you have penned here is stunning. You are a wonder! Thank you for your visit to my poetry. Your comments are always as uplifting as your smile.
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Date: 5/5/2014 10:28:00 AM
Oh thanks much Monterey..:) as your smile too I wonder who brought that one lively cheerful smile. In your pic..:) hugs much..:)
Date: 5/5/2014 6:58:00 AM
very good pen Olive gl in contest ty for visiting my page hugs
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Date: 5/5/2014 10:24:00 AM
Thank you Shadow..:) was actually caught up in ante with your catchy titles that it lured me to read them :) and it's good I did :) olive here..:)
Date: 5/4/2014 4:43:00 PM
threads of sunbeams...fragrance afloat...etc are phrases that make an impact. lovely sijo; deep read. gl in contest. // paul
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Date: 5/4/2014 4:52:00 PM
Weee again Paul just a try..:) thanks much..God bless you and all of us ..:D! Hurray!!
Date: 5/4/2014 9:45:00 AM
Oooh, that's really nice. Liked a lot
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Date: 5/4/2014 4:51:00 PM
Thank you for the visit Amy..:) have a great day ahead..:)