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Sept. 7. 2024
Nursery Rhyme. 7. Poetry Contest.
Sponsor- Eve Roper
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Little Talia and her Toys

Little Talia, so cute and sweet, Was so absorbed in her pursuit. She built a tower, high and straight, With colored blocks to her great delight. She sat surrounded by toys in an isle- A giraffe, an elephant and a crocodile Her imagination ran wild and free, As she built a world of her own in glee. Her tower rose to the sky, so high. A masterpiece, catching every eye. Little Talia clapped her hands in joy, As if admiring her own art and toy.
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Goldsmith Avatar
September 30, 2024 at 2:12 PM
Congratulations on your win. What a fun/cute/sweet write for this picture. Have a great day with your win..................
Narain Avatar
September 9, 2024 at 10:47 AM
beautiful lullaby.
Onclaud Avatar
September 7, 2024 at 6:35 PM
such childlike wonder from your pen ,valsa ...love your story !
DiMino Avatar
September 7, 2024 at 8:00 AM
Hi Valsa; charming, delightful. This would make a lovely children's book.
Bayles Avatar
September 7, 2024 at 7:39 AM
I enjoyed this and the delight of a child.
Empress Avatar
September 7, 2024 at 7:08 AM
So cute how youv written this nursery rhyme, so precious how they find pleasure in lil things! Kids are a joy to watch and be around, healing for the soul and heart too! I love the name talia! And also the last lines really stood out for me dear sweet valsa! You really can do any form and any theme just effortlessly and in such eloquence! Pleasure reading you today. Sending you always light. Best wishes in the contest
Cunningham Avatar
September 7, 2024 at 12:18 AM
A lovely nursery rhyme Valsa, best of luck in the contest and enjoy your weekend. Tom
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