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Little Princess In Satin

Little princess in satin shoes and dress Curtain rises as she makes her debut, Important attendees are me and you She has been afraid of making a mess Dancing across stage’s apron finesse, To a rousing applause in ev'ry pew Little princess in satin. Tomorrow her troupe will be in the press I’m certain she’ll receive a top review She’s already got an award or two, She continues to blossom, what progress! Little princess in satin. SECOND PLACE WINNER Written October 12, 2022 Rondine - 10 syllables per line checked by PS Syllable Counter aRbbaabR abbaR Submitted to "Rousing Rondine" Poetry Contest Sponsored by Jeff Kyser

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Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 11/22/2022 7:25:00 AM

Sweet write Milt. Congratulations on your win! :)

L Milton Hankins
Date: 11/22/2022 9:27:00 AM

Thank you, Linda. I appreciate it.

Christuraj Alex

Date: 11/21/2022 7:46:00 PM

Beautiful scene and action. Congratulations!

L Milton Hankins
Date: 11/22/2022 9:27:00 AM

Thank you, Chris. Always good to hear from you.

Ann Peck

Date: 11/21/2022 9:31:00 AM

Sweet poem, Milton. Congratulations!

L Milton Hankins
Date: 11/21/2022 10:36:00 AM

Ann, thank you so much for your warm comment.

Janice Canerdy

Date: 11/21/2022 6:57:00 AM

Milton, this is a lovely, vividly descriptive gem. Yes, we feel such pride in the accomplishments of our little ones! CONGRATS on your win. Janice

L Milton Hankins
Date: 11/21/2022 10:36:00 AM

Thank you, Janice. I appreciate your commenting on my work.

Terry Miller

Date: 11/21/2022 6:47:00 AM

Another beautiful poem Milton, and perfectly written in the rondine form.

L Milton Hankins
Date: 11/21/2022 10:36:00 AM

Thanks, Terry.

Jeff Kyser

Date: 11/21/2022 5:04:00 AM

Good vibes from this one, Milt - memories of watching the daughters up on stage, and a lot of belly laughs at some of their missteps. Nice rondine, and congrats on your 2nd place!

L Milton Hankins
Date: 11/21/2022 10:37:00 AM

Thanks, Jeff. I enjoyed writing for your contest, and I appreciate your giving me a place on your winners' list.

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 10/14/2022 9:57:00 PM

"She has been afraid of receiving boos" This is sadly the case sometimes. I am glad it worked out so well for this little princess.

L Milton Hankins
Date: 10/15/2022 7:58:00 AM

Oh, she was a hit, believe me!

Gershon Wolf

Date: 10/13/2022 3:14:00 PM

So adorable, Milt. I can just picture the little princess on stage, so happy... and her audience swelling with pride. Delightful write! ~ Gershon

L Milton Hankins
Date: 10/13/2022 8:05:00 PM

Thanks, gw. My own daughter (after her mother and I were divorced) went on to appear in child beauty contests. I never would have allowed that, but I had no say in it.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 10/13/2022 12:35:00 AM

Brought back happy memories of my three daughters in school plays. Seems a lifetime ago now and they have kids of their own. Tom

L Milton Hankins
Date: 10/13/2022 8:08:00 AM

I'm so glad you liked it and that it brought back some good memories, Tom.

Becky Forbes

Date: 10/12/2022 3:57:00 PM

Your pride in this precious little one oozes through. Made me feel like I was there with the protagonist watching her. :-)

L Milton Hankins
Date: 10/12/2022 4:03:00 PM

I'm so glad you enjoyed this poem, Becky. Brought back lots of memories for me.

Michael Tor

Date: 10/12/2022 2:40:00 PM

Such a lovely write for all those little girls in plays to be recognized and loved by all who are there to see and enjoy. You have captured the magical moment they feel along with the audience, teachers, and parents. Refreshing to read reminded me of my daughter Ashley in one of her plays. A favorite Milton...

L Milton Hankins
Date: 10/12/2022 4:04:00 PM

Thanks, Michael, so much. It brought back some wonderful memories for me.