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Little Mouse

I am just a lonely little mouse Each little bit of cheese you give me I begin to grow My eyes they begin to light up In height with love in mind Kissing you the princess Everything to love To outwit the frog Could I be your prince All I ask treasure me From within the heart To touch its inner most beauty My mirrored dream A beautiful start Who will put the cheese On the table

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Robin Davis

Date: 11/10/2013 5:16:00 PM

Liam this is an imaginative and creative write. It makes the reader smile with the cuteness. Nice job

Mustapha Mohammed

Date: 9/3/2013 6:20:00 AM

Cute write Liam. The frog strikes again and don't watch me with that cheeky grin lol. Take care partner.

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 9/3/2013 9:49:00 AM

oh you can see me smiling from there peter pan ha ha the tights are on micks latest white ship ha ha you got to read it his ship sank ha ha

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 9/3/2013 6:15:00 AM

Provolone or parmegiano? : )..a sweet poem .Im sure one day someone will put all the cheeses..even ratatoulle's : ).When i was young..mum used to read for me that tale of the frog prince.Sweet poem here.

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 9/3/2013 9:47:00 AM

oh but i have wrote many stories i was always the frog awaiting a beautiful fairytale with a happy ending i will start posting just for you