Little Lulu Grows Up - a Nursery Rhyme

Lulu was Miss Moo-Moo's first baby calf 
She wibbelly-wobbled through the straw 
But when it came time for her oatmeal 
She danced and pranced around the stall. 

Miss Moo-Moo called her first baby Lulu 
Because, she said, it rhymed with Moo-Moo 
And when dancing little Lulu took a spill 
Miss Moo-Moo said, “Lulu, you’d better chill!” 

Farmer Brown loved Miss Moo-Moo and Lulu 
And took especially good care of them both 
He watched after Moo-Moo's every need 
And kept a record of little Lulu’s growth. 

Moo-Moo's pride, Lulu grew big and strong, 
Like every young calf should do 
She ate her breakfast and drank her milk 
And every growing boy and girl should, too. 

When Miss Moo-Moo and Lulu could pasture, 
Mother and daughter, out in the meadow 
Father Brown loved to watch them wander 
He could see them from his veranda window.

SECOND PLACE WINNER
March 12, 2021
For "Nursery Rhyme Contest - 2"
Sponsored by Eve Roper

[Published in Nursery Rhymes & Stories From Poets Around the World, Eve Roper, Editor, Kindle Direct Publishing, 2021]
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Roper Avatar
March 20, 2021 at 9:12 PM
Congratulations on your win,Milton, in my Nursery Rhyme2 contest. A great story for little children. Please visit my blog on the contest . Nursery Rhyme 2 Contest. - Eve Roper's Blog (poetrysoup.com) Hugs Eve
Hankins Avatar
March 20, 2021 at 9:20 PM
Thanks. I read your blog earlier, Eve. I didn't know which category my rhyme fit into. I have always thought a nursery rhyme rhymed and flowed and appealed to the child, i.e. Humpty Dumpty....I suppose the reader would have to make up his/her own mind, but I'll bet any little kid would enjoy hearing about Moo-Moo and Lulu. Thanks.
Andresen Avatar
March 20, 2021 at 10:38 AM
- Back with congratulations :)
Hankins Avatar
March 20, 2021 at 11:01 AM
Ah, thanks, Sunshine, from Moo-Moo, Lulu, and me! Have a wonderful weekend.
Pettit Avatar
March 15, 2021 at 11:00 AM
An impressive write. I'm sure Eve will give this one serious consideration for her contest.
Hankins Avatar
March 15, 2021 at 12:03 PM
Thanks, Robert. It was a fun write. It also gave me an idea for a children's book...which I probably will never write!
Jayasankar Avatar
March 14, 2021 at 10:40 AM
This is SO good Milton. Enjoyed reading this. Nice names you chose, Lulu, Moo-moo. Best wishes in the contest. God bless.. ~ Ani
Hankins Avatar
March 14, 2021 at 1:57 PM
Thanks, Anitha. Good luck to you, too. I just hope Moo-Moo and Lulu strike a positive chord.
Krutsinger Avatar
March 14, 2021 at 5:35 AM
Ah so pretty, darling, whimsical and fun! Good luck in the contest.
Hankins Avatar
March 14, 2021 at 7:52 AM
Thanks, Caren. I think it has a chance.
Devonshire Avatar
March 13, 2021 at 9:43 AM
Such a lovely nursery rhyme, Milton. I smiled all the way through it. I have no children, so it's hard for me to write this way, but you did a terrific job! Best wishes for a win in Eve's contest. Hugs, carolyn
Hankins Avatar
March 13, 2021 at 10:03 AM
Thanks, Carolyn. I have to admit I am sort of proud of it. It came so quickly, too, when I started thinking of a nursery rhyme.
Mcintosh Avatar
March 13, 2021 at 6:24 AM
Charming, lovely and joyful... a loving poem full of light and love and laughter from your heart. Love it. God bless you friend, with love, Gina
Hankins Avatar
March 13, 2021 at 8:59 AM
Gina, thanks so much. Having you call me friend is a real honor. I enjoy your work immensely. Thanks for your kind descriptions of my nursery rhyme.
Andresen Avatar
March 13, 2021 at 2:08 AM
- A charming and fun nursery rhyme, Milton :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Hankins Avatar
March 13, 2021 at 8:58 AM
Anne-Lise, thank you so much. Your support means a lot to me.
Daniel Avatar
March 13, 2021 at 1:33 AM
Very beautiful nursery rhyme, Milton:)
Hankins Avatar
March 13, 2021 at 8:58 AM
Thank you so much, Jo. I kind of like it myself. It just popped into my head.
Buhagiar Avatar
March 12, 2021 at 10:56 PM
An elegant nursery rhyme. Loved it right through. Best for a win.
Hankins Avatar
March 13, 2021 at 8:57 AM
Thanks, Victor. I'm so glad you enjoyed it.
Dietrich Avatar
March 12, 2021 at 3:41 PM
the word that comes to me for this one is CHARMING. Utterly charming.
Hankins Avatar
March 12, 2021 at 3:46 PM
Thanks, Andrea. It's always an honor when you read and enjoy one of my poems. I'm glad you enjoyed my nursery rhyme.
Ball Avatar
March 12, 2021 at 2:00 PM
A beautiful story poem for a children's book. Great imagery. Nicely done. God Bless, JB
Hankins Avatar
March 12, 2021 at 2:02 PM
Thanks, Judy. I appreciate your encouragement. Hey, perhaps someone can write a children's book using Moo-Moo and Little Lulu as characters. That would make me very proud.
Ligon Avatar
March 12, 2021 at 1:29 PM
This is a really cute nursery rhyme story that might encourage children to eat their breakfast so they can grow up big and strong like Lulu.
Hankins Avatar
March 12, 2021 at 2:01 PM
I certainly hope so. Thanks for reading it, and thanks for your comment.
Rodrigues Avatar
March 12, 2021 at 12:45 PM
Miss Moo-moo and Baby Lulu! You’d better chill… definitely a modern day nursery rhyme!
Hankins Avatar
March 12, 2021 at 1:07 PM
Chuckling. Yeah, I suppose so. I needed a decent rhyme! Thanks for reading my effort, Kim.
Lamoureux Avatar
March 12, 2021 at 11:51 AM
This is so much fun. I imagined reading it as a book to my grandson.
Hankins Avatar
March 12, 2021 at 12:08 PM
Hey thanks, Richard. Even my grandson is grown and has a new little one. I'm getting way too old for writing nursery rhymes, not having a toddler to read them to.
Kauffman Avatar
March 12, 2021 at 11:08 AM
So charming and delightful LM! Love the tongue twister names! Best of luck in the contest! Blessings.
Hankins Avatar
March 12, 2021 at 12:07 PM
Thanks, Sam. They just rolled off my tongue. Hope you'll write one for the contest, too.
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