Little Lad and Big Dog

In the woods amidst the fog
Were a little lad and his big dog
Lost they were with direction at odds
The little lad pawed and trudged through the sod

With no end in sight to the little lad's fright
Little lad panicked he'd be here all night
So the little lad bawled and endlessly called
But no one answered his piteous squalls

Not a soul was 'round  to hear such a sound
So the little lad crawled and tried to recall
Which way they came in on this so-called
Adventurous walk of little lad and big dog

And then little lad saw with loads of awe
That mommy had found them with help of the law
He thought she would scold and prepared to be told
Of all the punishments his future would hold

But mommy rushed to him, her joy uncontrolled
She kissed his face, her fears untold
And out of the woods amidst the fog
Mommy took home little lad and big dog
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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July 12, 2013 at 9:44 PM
APRIL, ~CONGRATULATIONS~ a fine winning poem in the "Little Lad and big Dog" contest by: Seren.... entertaining work... LINDA
Merryman Avatar
July 10, 2013 at 4:53 PM
Congrats on your wonderful win, April! Love, Kim
Candy Avatar
July 9, 2013 at 12:29 AM
April..!! Congratulations on your win..! ;) *Hug ~ Shirley
Roberts Avatar
July 7, 2013 at 7:55 PM
Congrats and thank you for your entry ...Seren
Gabriella Avatar
July 7, 2013 at 8:10 PM
OMG YAYAYAYAY! Thanks so much!! :D :D:D:D
Lamoureux Avatar
June 30, 2013 at 6:45 PM
Your poem is very good, have a look at the rhyme scheme. I rewrote my poem because I had written couplets. Shoud be abab cdcd efef ghgh. Click on the form tab above your title to see an example and explanation of the form. Wether you rewrite it or not, it is a very good poem and I enjoyed reading it. I kept my original one and just wrote another instead.
Sirak Avatar
June 28, 2013 at 7:52 AM
This poem is so sweet with such a perfect ending. Well done
Pettit Avatar
June 27, 2013 at 11:19 PM
Very nicely written with great descriptiveness and rhyming.
Hamilton Avatar
June 27, 2013 at 7:38 PM
I like the flow of this gl in contest Shadow x smiles
Goff Avatar
June 27, 2013 at 6:58 PM
Sweet, April! Great story! Your last stanza remarkable! Jimbo
Gildersleeve Avatar
June 27, 2013 at 6:03 PM
April this is excellent tale in rhyme. The dialogue read smoothly with meter. It should place well in the contest. Warm Smiles, Connie
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