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Swift Little Beauties dart About seeking Nectar from nature's colorful flowers Catch A glimpse Of them when They perch, then off They go, hovering in iridescent glow 4-28-19 Tetractys This Contest Sponsor: Charles Messina

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Brandy Nicole

Date: 5/4/2019 9:49:00 PM

Congratulations Joseph, on this win. :) Brandy

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/4/2019 2:47:00 PM

Yours was such a cute poem. Congrats, JOseph.

Alexis Y.

Date: 5/4/2019 8:47:00 AM

Hi Joseph, Your double Tetractys and photos work well together. I enjoy looking at hummingbirds. Well done. Congratulations on your fine win:-) Alexis

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/4/2019 8:14:00 AM

- Congratulations on your great winning poem, Joseph :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Charles Messina

Date: 5/4/2019 7:57:00 AM

Lovely write, Joseph. Something about hummingbirds that puts a smile on everyone's face. Congratulations on your win my friend...Charlie

Brandy Nicole

Date: 4/28/2019 10:38:00 PM

You have captured these moments so beautifully. As tiny wings of a hummingbird drift in the wind. So elegant and graceful. Spring is in the Air. :) Brandy

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/28/2019 4:44:00 PM

In incandescent glow . That is such a beautiful last line to this sweet poem.

Jan Allison

Date: 4/28/2019 10:09:00 AM

absolutely delightful Joseph I would love to see one of these birds for real one day:-) hugs Jan xx

Tom Cunningham

Date: 4/28/2019 9:38:00 AM

Lovely tetractys Joseph, love the pics too. Good luck. Tom

Heidi Sands

Date: 4/28/2019 8:44:00 AM

This is really nice. Beautiful to read today :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 4/28/2019 7:34:00 AM

I can visualize the scene in your words..beautifully done, Joseph.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 4/28/2019 6:28:00 AM

These beautiful little hummingbirds are almost otherworldly in their amazing flight. I have a second cousin who is very talented at carving wood and he gave me an exquisite hummingbird that looks so real. I think that little bird is my favorite of all birds. My mother-in-law fed one that got so tame it would eat out of her hand. My father-in-law took a picture of it. It is very unusual to see one that tame. I love your beautiful poem Joseph! : ) xxoo