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Oh, little spider in my pretty garden lurking, weaving a gossamer web working, working; it is twined and twined among my roses red, lovely, lovely is each delicate filigree thread. Thank you so much little spider for taking care, for catching those garden insects in your snare; and when a strong wind blows your web away, you create a new web to trap your insect prey. Keep up the good work my little spider friend, in my garden control those bugs till summer's end. _________________________________ July 15, 2016 Poetry/Rhyme/Little Garden Spider Copyright Protected, ID 16-808-914-0 All Rights Reserved. Written Under Pseudonym. Entered in the contest, New/Old Poems sponsor, Eve Roper First Place

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Date: 7/30/2016 7:35:00 AM
A 7 for this lovely, WINNING poem, Constance! Janice
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Date: 7/27/2016 10:04:00 AM
Beautiful poem my friend. A 7. Congrats on your beautiful win, bl
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Date: 7/26/2016 12:09:00 PM
Constance, your repeating words in this well constructed poem gift it with an even more impressive beauty! I love this! Congratulations on your top win! 7 ; )
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Date: 7/26/2016 8:19:00 AM
Congrats BW, for your top placement in the contest!! ;-)
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Date: 7/25/2016 10:10:00 PM
Very nice! Congrats!
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Date: 7/25/2016 8:03:00 PM
Broken Wings, congrats on your well deserved top place win lady! :)-luloo
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Date: 7/25/2016 5:39:00 PM
You bring such intricate beauty to that which many just look at in passing. Congratulations!
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Date: 7/25/2016 5:03:00 PM
Broken,, Congratulations on your win. **SKAT**
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Date: 7/25/2016 4:17:00 PM
Congratulations on your win....as a Scorp I'm partial to spiders.......
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Date: 7/25/2016 1:53:00 PM
Congratulations on your win :-) Hugs Eve
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Date: 7/19/2016 5:41:00 AM
A different point of view of the spider:) They are good as long as they don't enter the house:)
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Date: 7/15/2016 8:39:00 PM
I had a major fear of spiders until this year, the more I learned, the more I know how useful and great they really are, and your poem reflects that! Wonderful write :)
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Constance La France
Date: 7/18/2016 9:48:00 AM
Casares, me too, now I go and say hello and thank you~
Date: 7/15/2016 2:49:00 AM
Lovely warming poem, BW - a refreshing perspective to say the least!
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Constance La France
Date: 7/18/2016 9:49:00 AM
Linda, those spiders are busy controlling those pesky bugs !
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Constance La France
Date: 7/15/2016 10:17:00 AM
Michael , I used to get rid of the webs until I read they are good for the garden ~

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