Little Bright Stardrops

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Voice: Sara Ella

Little bright stardrops in emerald green
Emerald green forest in starlight so bright
Starlight so bright as you've never seen
You've never seen so much peace in the night

Night with a moonbeam that brightens my mood
Brightens my mood with small kisses of gold
Kisses of gold that gives feelings so good
Feelings so good they drive out the cold

Cold that crept up my mute spine in the eve
In the eve where the demons were waiting for me
Waiting for me with their smirks, I believe
I believe I can wish them away, you will see

You will see little stardrops in starlight so bright
So bright as the night without clouds without fear
Without fear I conquer my demons this night
This night is the first night without any tear

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January 7, 2017

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/8/2017 6:15:00 PM

Darren, I love the pattern you created playing off the endings of each line. Great styled poem!

Darren White
Date: 1/8/2017 11:44:00 PM

Yes, it's something that sat in the back of my mind for quite a while. It has a sort of cadence to it that I love.... like a see saw :)

White Wolf

Date: 1/7/2017 8:19:00 PM

This is amazing, Darren, I'm keeping this one in my favourites mate! /|\

Darren White
Date: 1/7/2017 11:13:00 PM

I love that Budgie, thank you :)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 1/7/2017 6:26:00 PM

incredible, darren... this is gold and it reminds me of a contest i did before with a form similar to this which i called' wreath.."... wow!..hugggs

Darren White
Date: 1/7/2017 11:12:00 PM

I think I remember that one? Wasn't too long ago, was it, Nette?