Little Boy Blue

I don’t know how to start
The story that I want told
The parts that chill me to the bone
And makes my blood run cold

When I was but a little child
And they thought it not be heard
Though I was busy with my play
I attended to each word

Never spoken above a whisper
Barely breathed the truths come out
The darkness that lived within our town
Beyond gruesome was no doubt

A mother and her children small 
While sleeping in their beds
Were each accosted everyone
And then were left for dead

The father when returning home
Was horrified at the question
That he would kill his family
Made him ill at the suggestion

He was overwrought and confused
Did someone have their four year old
Was he safe, was he well
This is where the darkness
Becomes a mystery no one would tell

Where’s the little boy 
That looks after the sheep
Why he’s under the haystack
Dead asleep


Written for Debbie Guzzi's   'Something wicked this way comes' contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Gorelick Avatar
May 14, 2009 at 3:30 PM
I am so loving this..the last stanza is terrific. Well deserved win. BG
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May 14, 2009 at 10:15 AM
Laurie, Congratulations on placing Danielle's contest. Your poem is definitely wicked. Love, Dane
Williams Avatar
May 14, 2009 at 9:58 AM
Hi Laurie.... well done sweety... congratulations !
Esquire Avatar
May 14, 2009 at 6:36 AM
Dear Sis Laurie,Congratulations on YOUR well deserved Third place Win in Deborah's Contest How horrifying The same thing happened to my foster brother George in my POEM Ma'am LOVE YOU and YOURS ALWAYS...HG
Townsend Avatar
May 14, 2009 at 5:52 AM
Congratulations on your third place win in the contest. Wonderful write. Smiles from Lolita
Strand Avatar
May 13, 2009 at 11:47 PM
Congrats on your success in Debbie's contest Laurie Rgds Brian
Moreno Avatar
May 13, 2009 at 6:45 PM
Congrats on 3rd Laurie...Raul
Hudson Avatar
May 13, 2009 at 5:50 PM
Oh shivers just fingered my spine-I loved each line! Congrats on this third place win!-AA
Richards Avatar
May 13, 2009 at 4:25 PM
Hey there Kentucky.....Hooray..and yippee for you!!!! You took the "sugar sweet" out of this nursery rhyme..that's for darn sure!! I will never think of that sleeping little guy the same way...ever, ever again!! :) !!! Congratulations on your winning poem...you wicked Mother Goose!! :)LOL!!
Winter Avatar
May 13, 2009 at 4:00 PM
YAY! Congrats Laurie on your big win in Debbie's contest! Completely awesome and so well deserved! Love, Shar xo
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April 24, 2009 at 11:31 AM
Certainly a sad tale--and definitely evil. Creative slant on the topic. Best wishes in the contest. Thank you for your kind comments on my poetry. Keep on writing. Karen
Reynolds Avatar
April 22, 2009 at 4:50 AM
EEK! I'll never see that boy the same way again - yikes, hide the mother goose book! lol good luck in the contest, love, Kristin
Richards Avatar
April 21, 2009 at 8:14 AM
OOOOO.....chilled me to the bone, .... talk about grimm (not so very fairy) tales !! Too much like a headline in a daily newspaper....too awful, yet too real. You caught pure wickedness in this one, Ms. Ginn. Ok, missy.......thanks for another sleepless night ..........! (Soup mail)
Atanacio Avatar
April 21, 2009 at 6:17 AM
wow LG this is a winner! I LOVED IT! just wow again wow
Austin Avatar
April 20, 2009 at 5:25 AM
This is indeed a black Mother Goose, "makes my blood run cold." Very effective, Laurie. Love, daver
Moreno Avatar
April 19, 2009 at 1:34 PM
Nice flow, beautiful work and best of luck in the contest...Raul
Smalling Avatar
April 19, 2009 at 11:43 AM
This feels like such a current story in the death culture of our world ... best of luck with this one ... it certainly pulled me in.
Devonshire Avatar
April 19, 2009 at 6:57 AM
Truly frightening with a deep sense of reality, Laurie. We don't have to read horror novels to find wickedness. We need only open the newspaper. The last verse is a "killer." Outstanding work! Love, Carolyn
Lopez Avatar
April 18, 2009 at 2:43 PM
Good luck in the contest and great work.
Chircop Avatar
April 18, 2009 at 2:24 PM
frightening and chilling-bravo
Williams Avatar
April 18, 2009 at 12:22 PM
Great poem Laurie ( hope its not true ) good luck in the compo :)
Goff Avatar
April 18, 2009 at 10:32 AM
spooky, spooky write! Laurie! good luck in the contest! Jim
Winter Avatar
April 18, 2009 at 8:07 AM
OMgosh Laurie. Chilled to the bone is exactly how I feel. Wow, and how horrific. Your story is frightening and sadly sounds real. Your last verse a kicker. Really got to me. Incredibly excellent writing. Beyond wicked. Good luck. (Hope it is not real.) Love, Shar
Higgins Avatar
April 18, 2009 at 7:49 AM
This is done well with a chill...best wishes in the contest.
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