Little Boat

On my little boat, bobbing in the sea. The wind has changed direction and forced me to my 
knees.
The boat, it rocked so violently I was shaken to the core.
My heart seemed frozen as I waited for more.


The air became less troubled as it swept over me, kissing a reminder.
 I may wander bobbing in the sea.
If I get in trouble who will rescue me.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Fraser Avatar
August 30, 2009 at 5:16 AM
Delightful little read Jackie>>James
Culverhouse Avatar
August 29, 2009 at 7:43 AM
good writing, keep it up and welcome to the soup.
Brown Avatar
August 28, 2009 at 12:56 PM
I enjoyed reading your splendid poetry today Jackie. Thank you for sharing. Love, Carol
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