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Little Boat

On my little boat, bobbing in the sea. The wind has changed direction and forced me to my knees. The boat, it rocked so violently I was shaken to the core. My heart seemed frozen as I waited for more. The air became less troubled as it swept over me, kissing a reminder. I may wander bobbing in the sea. If I get in trouble who will rescue me.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 8/30/2009 5:16:00 AM
Delightful little read Jackie>>James
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Date: 8/29/2009 7:43:00 AM
good writing, keep it up and welcome to the soup.
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Date: 8/28/2009 12:56:00 PM
I enjoyed reading your splendid poetry today Jackie. Thank you for sharing. Love, Carol
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