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Little Bikini On the Beach

"All a man really wants, is a girl who looks good in a bikini." - Jack Freestone More skin makes my heart pound, as you prance around. Your bikini shifts as your feet hit the sandy ground, I hope I do not make a sound. My dad said be careful of what you wear, never go too bare. Be careful of the wolves out there, they will take you and not care.

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Jan Allison

Date: 8/15/2023 10:03:00 PM

what a fun poem Paula,love the poets notes too!:-) hugs Jan xx

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/16/2023 2:59:00 PM

Thanks for your note. Glad you enjoyed my fun beach write and love my note. Hugs... Have a fun day writing away................

David Kavanagh

Date: 8/15/2023 2:09:00 PM

A fun one Paula with a moral from dad at the end, very clever and well put together, all the best in contest, cheers David

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/16/2023 2:57:00 PM

Thanks for your note and for your best wishes. Glad you found this to be a very clever beach write. That makes me happy. Yes, some words from dad. He was a very wise person. Have a fun day writing away................

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 8/15/2023 1:41:00 PM

Great poem! Stay away from the itzy bitzy yellow polka dot bikini. I didn’t put bikinis on my girls. The first time my daughter wore one as an adult, she didn’t want to come out of the water…lol

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/16/2023 2:53:00 PM

Thanks for your note. Glad you like this fun beach write. Once an adult, they can do what they want. Have a fun day writing away................

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/15/2023 12:49:00 PM

- Remember what your father said ... he's right - Reading with a smile, Paula :) - Love it :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/15/2023 12:55:00 PM

Thanks for your note and for your best wishes. Glad you love this fun beach write and are reading with a smile. That make me happy. Dad was always right. A wise man he was. Hugs... Have a fun day writing away................

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/15/2023 12:47:00 PM

I really enjoyed this and also the little story you told in comments

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/15/2023 12:51:00 PM

Thanks for your note. Glad you enjoyed this write and the little story I told below. Have a fun day writing away................

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 8/15/2023 11:31:00 AM

Little Bikini On The Beach ~ Date Written: 8/15/2023 ~ AAAABBBB ~ Note: One night my dad told me to change clothes or stay home. I had been seeing this guy for over 6 months. I kept my mouth closed and changed so we could go out.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/15/2023 12:50:00 PM

:)))