Tahira Parveen Poet Free verse

Little Bee In Hospital

Little Bee in Hospital
Terrible news.
Nurse says I’m not getting any the better.
The doctor doesn’t know why.  
Says need to watch what I eat,
 “clinically obese” patients need to diet.
I’m stuck in hospital.
While People bring me all these gifts of food.
 Thank you for the cupcake, crisps and coke.
Sure, to get better really quickly

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Swetha Vangaveti May 26, 2022 at 11:03 AM How well everyone can relate to this!! Lovely and cute!

Paul Callus October 13, 2020 at 3:29 PM What a cute, 'sweet' poem this is, Tahira! Staying healthy is what we aim for....but the temptation is often hard to resist:) Regards // pau Tahira Parveen October 14, 2020 at 7:48 AM Thank you for your comment Paul. Will come by later.

Silent One October 12, 2020 at 8:03 AM hey hope you feel better.. Tahira Parveen October 12, 2020 at 11:32 AM Hi Silent One, Yeah... I know. Better now. Regret somethings... but what can you do. I'll come by in a moment. Thanks for coming by.

Paula Goldsmith October 11, 2020 at 10:04 AM What a sweet, cute and fun write. Love your little bee. Enjoy your day writing away...................... Tahira Parveen October 12, 2020 at 11:23 AM Thank you for your lovely comment Paula. Take care and stay safe.

Arturo Michael October 11, 2020 at 8:12 AM A sweet little write....

Kim Rodrigues October 10, 2020 at 9:44 AM I know! I’m not eating sweets and my sweet husband brings me chocolate. Gave up diet coke, he comes home with two boxes. Sab-O-tage! Tahira Parveen October 10, 2020 at 11:26 AM Same here, everyone wants to eat dessert at dinner all of a sudden! Thanks for the comment.