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Little Bee in Hospital

Little Bee in Hospital Terrible news. Nurse says I’m not getting any the better. The doctor doesn’t know why. Says need to watch what I eat, “clinically obese” patients need to diet. I’m stuck in hospital. While People bring me all these gifts of food. Thank you for the cupcake, crisps and coke. Sure, to get better really quickly

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Date: 10/13/2020 3:29:00 PM
What a cute, 'sweet' poem this is, Tahira! Staying healthy is what we aim for....but the temptation is often hard to resist:) Regards // pau
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Tahira Parveen
Date: 10/14/2020 7:48:00 AM
Thank you for your comment Paul. Will come by later.
Date: 10/12/2020 8:03:00 AM
hey hope you feel better..
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Tahira Parveen
Date: 10/12/2020 11:32:00 AM
Hi Silent One, Yeah... I know. Better now. Regret somethings... but what can you do. I'll come by in a moment. Thanks for coming by.
Date: 10/11/2020 10:04:00 AM
What a sweet, cute and fun write. Love your little bee. Enjoy your day writing away......................
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Tahira Parveen
Date: 10/12/2020 11:23:00 AM
Thank you for your lovely comment Paula. Take care and stay safe.
Date: 10/11/2020 8:12:00 AM
A sweet little write....
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Date: 10/10/2020 9:44:00 AM
I know! I’m not eating sweets and my sweet husband brings me chocolate. Gave up diet coke, he comes home with two boxes. Sab-O-tage!
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Tahira Parveen
Date: 10/10/2020 11:26:00 AM
Same here, everyone wants to eat dessert at dinner all of a sudden! Thanks for the comment.