Little Bee

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Little Bee I've been given a fancy name for my illness Clinically obese It may be contagious Never before seen in my colony I can't work or lift a finger Nice to see every one rally around me Even the queen bee is worried As what happened to me All for one, hopefully one for all Giving me a hand I'm going to a special unit for unique bees

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J Hamilton Gist

Date: 9/16/2017 6:41:00 PM

But you are coherently imperturbable enough to see, understand and express yourself in the beauty of rhyme. You are a member of special unit Blessed.

Tahira Parveen
Date: 9/17/2017 10:41:00 AM

Thank you for commenting J :)

Paul Callus

Date: 8/24/2017 8:55:00 AM

Aren't we all unique, Tahira! I have a feeling there's nothing wrong with this little bee...just making the most of the realization that work is not compulsory after all:) Regards // paul ps...I like your videos:)

Tahira Parveen
Date: 8/24/2017 2:34:00 PM

I appreciate your comment and i'm glad you enjoy the videos :-)