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Listen To the Warm

In a marriage day party i was there talking with a friend 
                      while a dancing program was going on the stage
          i have seen a beautiful girl and a handsome boy were dancing together 
                        with the rhythm of the music played there in 
                     along with the other invitees of the marriage party 
           Their dance was so wonderful that majority of the invitee-audiences
                          were enjoying and appraising them loudly 
                                But i marked an interesting thing 
                      that among all the participants many danced well 
      but only their dance captivated the majority invitee-audiences and me too 
         They danced keeping eye in eye, hands with hands and legs with legs 
                          as they were both mesmerized in their dance
                               After returning from the marriage party
                             i came to know that they were real lovers
                                           Then i was certain
           that the magic of dance was only the warmth of their loving hearts                            
                       what the other dancers were missing while dancing
           Loving hearts are always warm and warm hearts are always loving
                                           i am now sanguine 

Written on 19th April, 2016
Contest sponsored by:Sponsored by: Laura Loo

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 5/13/2016 2:54:00 AM
BL, Congratulations on your "Warm-Prose Contest Win" XOX ~LINDA~
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Bl Devnath
Date: 5/13/2016 9:07:00 AM
Thanks my lovely *friend for your wishes. Loved always, bl
Date: 5/12/2016 11:20:00 AM
Congratulations on your win!
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Bl Devnath
Date: 5/12/2016 12:32:00 PM
Thanks my lovely friend for your wishes. Loved always, bl
Date: 5/12/2016 5:33:00 AM
Devnath congrats on your wonderful placement in Laura Loo's Listen To The Warm Prose Contest!
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Bl Devnath
Date: 5/12/2016 10:22:00 AM
Thanks my lovely friend for your wishes. Loved always, bl
Date: 5/11/2016 11:56:00 PM
very nice and congrats on your win
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Bl Devnath
Date: 5/12/2016 10:21:00 AM
Thanks my lovely friend for your wishes. Loved always, bl
Date: 5/11/2016 8:26:00 AM
BL, .thank you for being a part of my contest and congrats on your placement :)-luloo
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Bl Devnath
Date: 5/11/2016 12:04:00 PM
Thanks my lovely friend for giving me placement in the contest held by you. Loved always, bl
Date: 5/1/2016 5:11:00 AM
When there is warmth between two people, it has a way of always shining through. Such a lovely expression, and much enjoyed!
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Bl Devnath
Date: 5/1/2016 9:08:00 AM
Thanks my lovely friend for your beautiful comment. Loved always, bl
Date: 4/18/2016 10:27:00 PM
Nice presentation.I enjoyed. Keep writing....with love.
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Bl Devnath
Date: 4/19/2016 9:05:00 AM
Thanks my lovely friend for your beautiful comment. Loved always, bl
Date: 4/18/2016 7:37:00 PM
Hi BL: May I say that this prose WAS warm and epitomized the lovely way you expressed the dance and love together. My compliments!
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Bl Devnath
Date: 4/19/2016 9:04:00 AM
Thanks my lovely friend for stopping by. Loved always, bl
Date: 4/18/2016 5:00:00 PM
Beautifully written, BL. I could feel the warmth of love in your words. I wish you all the best for Laura's contest! Sandra
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Bl Devnath
Date: 4/18/2016 5:04:00 PM
Thanks my lovely friend for your beautiful comment with credit and for your wishes. Loved always, bl

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