Listen To the Warm

In a marriage day party i was there talking with a friend 
                      while a dancing program was going on the stage
          i have seen a beautiful girl and a handsome boy were dancing together 
                        with the rhythm of the music played there in 
                     along with the other invitees of the marriage party 
           Their dance was so wonderful that majority of the invitee-audiences
                          were enjoying and appraising them loudly 
                                But i marked an interesting thing 
                      that among all the participants many danced well 
      but only their dance captivated the majority invitee-audiences and me too 
         They danced keeping eye in eye, hands with hands and legs with legs 
                          as they were both mesmerized in their dance
                               After returning from the marriage party
                             i came to know that they were real lovers
                                           Then i was certain
           that the magic of dance was only the warmth of their loving hearts                            
                       what the other dancers were missing while dancing
           Loving hearts are always warm and warm hearts are always loving
                                           i am now sanguine 

Written on 19th April, 2016
Contest sponsored by:Sponsored by: Laura Loo
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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A   Avatar
May 13, 2016 at 2:54 AM
BL, Congratulations on your "Warm-Prose Contest Win" XOX ~LINDA~
Devnath  Avatar
May 13, 2016 at 9:07 AM
Thanks my lovely *friend for your wishes. Loved always, bl
Williams Gault Avatar
May 12, 2016 at 11:20 AM
Congratulations on your win!
Devnath  Avatar
May 12, 2016 at 12:32 PM
Thanks my lovely friend for your wishes. Loved always, bl
Cheema Avatar
May 12, 2016 at 5:33 AM
Devnath congrats on your wonderful placement in Laura Loo's Listen To The Warm Prose Contest!
Devnath  Avatar
May 12, 2016 at 10:22 AM
Thanks my lovely friend for your wishes. Loved always, bl
La France Avatar
May 11, 2016 at 11:56 PM
very nice and congrats on your win
Devnath  Avatar
May 12, 2016 at 10:21 AM
Thanks my lovely friend for your wishes. Loved always, bl
Scars Avatar
May 11, 2016 at 8:26 AM
BL, .thank you for being a part of my contest and congrats on your placement :)-luloo
Devnath  Avatar
May 11, 2016 at 12:04 PM
Thanks my lovely friend for giving me placement in the contest held by you. Loved always, bl
Williams Gault Avatar
May 1, 2016 at 5:11 AM
When there is warmth between two people, it has a way of always shining through. Such a lovely expression, and much enjoyed!
Devnath  Avatar
May 1, 2016 at 9:08 AM
Thanks my lovely friend for your beautiful comment. Loved always, bl
Dalei Avatar
April 18, 2016 at 10:27 PM
Nice presentation.I enjoyed. Keep writing....with love.
Devnath  Avatar
April 19, 2016 at 9:05 AM
Thanks my lovely friend for your beautiful comment. Loved always, bl
Sergi Avatar
April 18, 2016 at 7:37 PM
Hi BL: May I say that this prose WAS warm and epitomized the lovely way you expressed the dance and love together. My compliments!
Devnath  Avatar
April 19, 2016 at 9:04 AM
Thanks my lovely friend for stopping by. Loved always, bl
Haight Avatar
April 18, 2016 at 5:00 PM
Beautifully written, BL. I could feel the warmth of love in your words. I wish you all the best for Laura's contest! Sandra
Devnath  Avatar
April 18, 2016 at 5:04 PM
Thanks my lovely friend for your beautiful comment with credit and for your wishes. Loved always, bl
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