Listen To the Unsaid

"Because I Love You."
 

     Because I love you
      together, we could
       sleep on our bed head to head,
          listen to the unsaid 
            light the flame without a name.
                                                    
Because I love you
together, we could 
   pretend its real
     listen to the unsaid 
        blow the snow & steal the wind.
                   
Because I love you
together, we could
   dream and scream 
      listen to the unsaid
         when resting in our nest.
                  
Because I love you
together, we could 
    watch the tide 
       listen to the unsaid
         while sitting side by side.
                  
Because I love you
together, we could
     be from the very few
           listen to the unsaid
                  as we only knew.
                        
Because I love you
together, we could
    hold hands just stand,
         listen to the unsaid
             then dance to the band.
                     
                                          I Will Always Love You
                                                     Together. 
                                                              . 2/6/2013
                                                             By. Therese Bacha
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Taylor Avatar
February 17, 2013 at 4:38 PM
Congrats, Therese. Nice going. xxxRalph
Bacha Avatar
February 18, 2013 at 8:20 AM
Thank you so much Ralph, have a wonderful day...Love Terry xoxo
Jones Avatar
February 17, 2013 at 2:09 PM
It's true love when all the small things are the important ones..congratulations
Bacha Avatar
February 17, 2013 at 2:21 PM
Thank you Donna, so nice of you to drop by....we are so lucky to have each other....have a nice evening....Love Terry xoxo
Andresen Avatar
February 17, 2013 at 4:43 AM
- A beautiful Valentines poem, it had to win Terry! - CONGRATULATIONS!! - Have a beautiful Sunday. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Bacha Avatar
February 17, 2013 at 5:39 AM
Hi Anne, so nice of you as usual to think of me......thank you, you to have a great Sunday Love Terry xoxo
Veetil Avatar
February 17, 2013 at 2:17 AM
congratulations on your win...
Bacha Avatar
February 17, 2013 at 5:38 AM
Thank you Mehnaz, i really do appreciate your passing by......have a great Sunday.Love Terry xoxo
Gasun Avatar
February 16, 2013 at 9:33 PM
Congratulations my dear friend Therese for your very sweet write and super win! I enjoyed reading your great Valentines poem! love/hugs, Leonora
Bacha Avatar
February 16, 2013 at 10:05 PM
Leonora, thank you my dear, so happy you liked it.....i hope you had a nice Valentine yourself.....Love Terry xoxo
May Avatar
February 16, 2013 at 6:43 PM
congrats on your win Theresa
Bacha Avatar
February 16, 2013 at 8:15 PM
Thank you so much Joseph....so nice of you to drop by......Terry xoxo
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February 16, 2013 at 4:13 PM
Congrats on your wonderful win, Terry! Love, Kim
Bacha Avatar
February 16, 2013 at 10:04 PM
Thank you so much Kim, so nice of you to pass by.....Love Terry..xoxo
Lamoureux Avatar
February 16, 2013 at 4:11 PM
Very sweet poem, I am sure she loved it.congrats!
Bacha Avatar
February 16, 2013 at 8:17 PM
Hi Richard thank you so much for caring.... i needed that as i was in and out of emergency lately..but today with the new medication i am back....thank you so much..Terry xoxo
Haick Avatar
February 16, 2013 at 2:59 PM
Congratulations on your very fine win, Theresa! It is very lovely!
Bacha Avatar
February 16, 2013 at 8:18 PM
Thank yo Annalise so nice of you to drop by......i wish you all the best.....Love Terry
A   Avatar
February 16, 2013 at 2:09 PM
Hi Terry, CONGRATULATIONS :-) with your lovely and wonderful poem. always & forever *LINDA
Bacha Avatar
February 16, 2013 at 8:15 PM
Thank yo so much Linda.....i had decided to take a break as i was in and out of emergency lately,,,,,,but now i feel good with the new medication....Thank yo again Linda so much.....Love Terry xoxoxo
Richards Avatar
February 16, 2013 at 1:41 PM
Love the words, Love the format....and layout...just beautifully done!!
Bacha Avatar
February 16, 2013 at 8:13 PM
Thank you so much Carrie, thank you i am so encouraged by all of you standing by my side......i was sick lately......but today i feel much better....i had decided to take a break form writing...but i feel great now.....Love Terry
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January 30, 2013 at 5:47 AM
Terry; This is very romantic and I loved it. Thanks for sharing. Lucilla
Bacha Avatar
January 30, 2013 at 6:33 AM
Thank you so much Lucy.....hope you are doing fine.....have a wonderful day....Love Terry xoxoxo
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January 14, 2013 at 6:01 PM
Congrats ....Seren
Bacha Avatar
January 14, 2013 at 6:11 PM
Thank you so much.....yes i was so happy...xoxo Terry
A  Avatar
January 13, 2013 at 7:56 PM
Congrats! ~SKAT
Bacha Avatar
January 13, 2013 at 8:09 PM
Thank you so much.....you encouraged me to continue writing.......thank you. Terry
A   Avatar
January 13, 2013 at 6:34 PM
Therese, a very romantic image. ;-) Congratulations with your lovely poem. In Mystic Rose' "Be My Valentine" contest. Always~ PD
Bacha Avatar
January 13, 2013 at 7:08 PM
Thank you PD.....yes i was happy and surprised.......take care Love Terry
Guzzi Avatar
January 13, 2013 at 3:00 PM
Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
Bacha Avatar
January 13, 2013 at 3:04 PM
Thank You Debbie so much......thank for always visiting my site.......And for choosing my poem......Love Terry
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January 10, 2013 at 1:46 PM
Liked the form and content of this Pleased to have visited today.."
Bacha Avatar
January 10, 2013 at 2:53 PM
Nice compliment coming from you Joe.....see you later..xoxo Terry
Johnson Avatar
January 9, 2013 at 3:18 PM
the unsaid speaks no words come through, what isnt said could make you blue, instead
Bacha Avatar
January 9, 2013 at 4:51 PM
Love the way you answered back in a poetry form.......whoa your good.....Thank you Don.........Terry
Eastman Avatar
January 4, 2013 at 10:49 AM
Built and flowed beautifully. Touching poem and description of a moment. You are very talented.
Bacha Avatar
January 4, 2013 at 10:56 AM
Whoa Carol thank yo so much.....your comments gives me courage....xoxoxo Terry
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January 4, 2013 at 9:09 AM
I love this one! Simple rhyme but described everything, gorgeous one Terry, i'm going to fave this one :) - hug, yanny
Bacha Avatar
January 4, 2013 at 9:27 AM
Yanny..thank you so much for visiting my poems......you encouraged me to continue writing...xoxoxo Terry
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January 3, 2013 at 4:32 PM
They said when you can be silent with someone, that is when you know you are in intimacy with that person. Love it, dear Therese. Enjoyed your write :)
Bacha Avatar
January 3, 2013 at 4:38 PM
Thank you so much.....i love it when important writers like you read my poem and like it......Happy New Year........Terry
A  Avatar
January 2, 2013 at 3:14 PM
Therese, together gets it all done the best way*LUV~SKAT
Bacha Avatar
January 2, 2013 at 3:21 PM
Whoa Whoa i am thrilled to have had the opportunity that YOU would read my poem .......Happy New Year..and thank you so much......xoxoxo Terry
Manassian Avatar
January 2, 2013 at 7:54 AM
Terry...lovely poem! The unsaid is often more powerful than the said! ;) I'd love to hear the unsaid with you!
Bacha Avatar
January 2, 2013 at 10:01 AM
Eileen thanks again...you are so warm in your comments......we will stay in touch....xoxo Terry
Lamoureux Avatar
January 1, 2013 at 9:58 AM
Very cool the way you did this, like waves on the page. The words seem to float off the page. I really enjoyed your words, great job!
Bacha Avatar
January 1, 2013 at 10:32 AM
Happy New Year.....thank you so much Richard......i loved reading your support.Terry
Cavanaugh Avatar
January 1, 2013 at 3:39 AM
Wishing you a Happy New Year. And a lifetime of happiness.
Bacha Avatar
January 1, 2013 at 9:03 AM
Thank You.......Best wishes to you to....a lifetime of writing and happiness.... Terry
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