Line Gauthier Poet Verse

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Listen To the Rustle

lavish tapestry of forest
freed whispers to the wind
seedling bursts of inspiration 
stir me to skip a breath

insight the gift I recognize
hushed voices to my ear
opulence derives from within
as rustle do the leaves



Tribute to Octavio Paz "There, within, inside my head, the tree speaks" – The Tree Within

AP: Honorable Mention 2020

Submitted on August 23, 2019 for contest CHOOSE AN OCTAVIO PAZ LINE sponsored by NETTE ONCLAUD  -  RANKED 5TH

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Eve Roper August 31, 2019 at 10:44 PM Line, congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve Line Gauthier September 2, 2019 at 10:12 PM Thanks, Eve. Much appreciated.

Andrea Dietrich August 30, 2019 at 5:21 PM I love how you were inspired by the line about the speaking tree. Very well done, and congratulations, Line. Line Gauthier September 2, 2019 at 10:13 PM Thanks, Andrea, for your much appreciated visit and comment.

Paul Callus August 30, 2019 at 7:58 AM The rustling of leaves whispers to a poetic heart, Line. Your poem appeals to my senses. ~ Congratulations on a merited win. Regards // paul Line Gauthier August 30, 2019 at 3:08 PM Thank you so much for your delightful visit and comment, Paul.

Kurt Ravidas August 30, 2019 at 6:02 AM A great rustle of inspiration. Congrats, Line) Line Gauthier August 30, 2019 at 6:46 AM Thank you, Kurt. Much appreciated.

Nette Onclaud August 30, 2019 at 1:37 AM such sensory appeal, line... fine congrats on your spot and thanks for joining my contest!.. huggs Line Gauthier August 30, 2019 at 6:45 AM Thank you, nette. Wonderful contest.

Caren Krutsinger August 25, 2019 at 6:45 AM Being a total lover of the woods, this one brought hushed voices to my ear and rather quickly. Line Gauthier August 25, 2019 at 7:14 AM Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, Caren.