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Listen To the Rustle

lavish tapestry of forest
freed whispers to the wind
seedling bursts of inspiration 
stir me to skip a breath

insight the gift I recognize
hushed voices to my ear
opulence derives from within
as rustle do the leaves



Tribute to Octavio Paz "There, within, inside my head, the tree speaks" – The Tree Within

AP: Honorable Mention 2020

Submitted on August 23, 2019 for contest CHOOSE AN OCTAVIO PAZ LINE sponsored by NETTE ONCLAUD  -  RANKED 5TH

Copyright © Line Gauthier | Year Posted 2019

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Eve Roper Date: 8/31/2019 10:44:00 PM Line, congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve Login to Reply Line Gauthier Date: 9/2/2019 10:12:00 PM Thanks, Eve. Much appreciated.

Andrea Dietrich Date: 8/30/2019 5:21:00 PM I love how you were inspired by the line about the speaking tree. Very well done, and congratulations, Line. Login to Reply Line Gauthier Date: 9/2/2019 10:13:00 PM Thanks, Andrea, for your much appreciated visit and comment.

Paul Callus Date: 8/30/2019 7:58:00 AM The rustling of leaves whispers to a poetic heart, Line. Your poem appeals to my senses. ~ Congratulations on a merited win. Regards // paul Login to Reply Line Gauthier Date: 8/30/2019 3:08:00 PM Thank you so much for your delightful visit and comment, Paul.

Kurt Ravidas Date: 8/30/2019 6:02:00 AM A great rustle of inspiration. Congrats, Line) Login to Reply Line Gauthier Date: 8/30/2019 6:46:00 AM Thank you, Kurt. Much appreciated.

Nette Onclaud Date: 8/30/2019 1:37:00 AM such sensory appeal, line... fine congrats on your spot and thanks for joining my contest!.. huggs Login to Reply Line Gauthier Date: 8/30/2019 6:45:00 AM Thank you, nette. Wonderful contest.

Caren Krutsinger Date: 8/25/2019 6:45:00 AM Being a total lover of the woods, this one brought hushed voices to my ear and rather quickly. Login to Reply Line Gauthier Date: 8/25/2019 7:14:00 AM Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, Caren.