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Listen To the Rustle

lavish tapestry of forest freed whispers to the wind seedling bursts of inspiration stir me to skip a breath insight the gift I recognize hushed voices to my ear opulence derives from within as rustle do the leaves Tribute to Octavio Paz "There, within, inside my head, the tree speaks" – The Tree Within AP: Honorable Mention 2020 Submitted on August 23, 2019 for contest CHOOSE AN OCTAVIO PAZ LINE sponsored by NETTE ONCLAUD - RANKED 5TH

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Date: 8/31/2019 10:44:00 PM
Line, congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve
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Line Gauthier
Date: 9/2/2019 10:12:00 PM
Thanks, Eve. Much appreciated.
Date: 8/30/2019 5:21:00 PM
I love how you were inspired by the line about the speaking tree. Very well done, and congratulations, Line.
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Date: 9/2/2019 10:13:00 PM
Thanks, Andrea, for your much appreciated visit and comment.
Date: 8/30/2019 7:58:00 AM
The rustling of leaves whispers to a poetic heart, Line. Your poem appeals to my senses. ~ Congratulations on a merited win. Regards // paul
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Line Gauthier
Date: 8/30/2019 3:08:00 PM
Thank you so much for your delightful visit and comment, Paul.
Date: 8/30/2019 6:02:00 AM
A great rustle of inspiration. Congrats, Line)
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Date: 8/30/2019 6:46:00 AM
Thank you, Kurt. Much appreciated.
Date: 8/30/2019 1:37:00 AM
such sensory appeal, line... fine congrats on your spot and thanks for joining my contest!.. huggs
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Line Gauthier
Date: 8/30/2019 6:45:00 AM
Thank you, nette. Wonderful contest.
Date: 8/25/2019 6:45:00 AM
Being a total lover of the woods, this one brought hushed voices to my ear and rather quickly.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 8/25/2019 7:14:00 AM
Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, Caren.

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