Listen

Listen to my voice There is no longer a choice Unless I stand up and make noise You power on me you will deploys I take off the chains of suppression Walk down the narrow path to progression Let go into the air all the transgression And give up the haunting misimpression

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/13/2017 8:00:00 PM

Nicely done, Kudzai. Into progression lead us!

Kudzai Mhangwa
Date: 8/15/2017 3:13:00 PM

Thank you for stopping by Andrea!

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 8/12/2017 7:31:00 AM

I think we should all with one voice/ Declare you to be our only choice/ To lead us to the path of progression/ To avoid any unwanted transgression! Inspiring my friend, Kudzai!

Kudzai Mhangwa
Date: 8/15/2017 3:14:00 PM

Demetrios my friend, thank you so much for your warm words! I'm glad I was able to inspire you, that's always been one of the reasons why I write.

Ovidiu Bocsa

Date: 8/12/2017 6:06:00 AM

Poetry may escape from chains of suppression, may find path to progression, but your quatrain give us a good impression of a gifted voice. Best regards.

Kudzai Mhangwa
Date: 8/15/2017 3:15:00 PM

Thank you Ovidiu! Best wishes and once again thank you for stopping by!