Listen

When you say, 'I've been there'
    I know better
  You never listened
    you didn't hear

  As you intone, 'I feel your pain'
    I bite my tongue
  You can't hurt in your mind
    when you don't have a brain

  O, that you'd listen to everything I have to say
    O, that you'd analyze the details my way
  You have two sound eyes, a pair of good ears too
    ~ Yet none are for me, they're only for you
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Date: 5/11/2023 4:47:00 AM
Good Morning Gershon. Hello. I found your entry and words most powerful and I see much truth within your words as well. I always wonder too if people are listening and seeing as well.... Thank you for sharing your poetic talent. May this day find you well. Blessings always (smile)
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Date: 5/10/2023 5:48:00 AM
Some folks are just self centered and that's a fact! Another good one, GW.
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Date: 5/10/2023 7:15:00 PM
I think you're right... Those folks get a jolt sometimes on the path of life.
Date: 5/10/2023 4:27:00 AM
WHAT!! I HEARD everything you said. I just didn't LISTEN to it......
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Date: 5/10/2023 7:15:00 PM
Call me. 1-800-LIS-TENU.
Date: 5/10/2023 3:16:00 AM
Too much me, too little us.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 5/10/2023 7:16:00 PM
Me, you; We two.
Date: 5/9/2023 9:02:00 PM
unless awakes mind of the heart
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 5/9/2023 9:20:00 PM
Aha! That is the approach -- the path to Truth, Peace, and Love! Thank you, Seeker
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