Tim B Poet Rhyme

Liselle

Locks of heaven carefully etched in stone
Lore and lure of purified grace shall atone
The radiance of beauty and frilly lace
Shared towards me by her beautiful face
Liselle my dear, grant me life again

Persephone only granted your sapid tears
Twirling in your longing and fears
Twisting in your rhythm of blissful motion
Rather tumultuous entwining notion

Cut off those locks dear and I'll kiss your cheek
Forever to protect you from those too meek
Dear Liselle, you are mine forever now
God's gift, his divinity, heavenly endowed
Breathe

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Nette Onclaud September 27, 2011 at 4:01 PM great diction and lyrical rendition of the theme, tim.. really nice! :) huggs, nette

Elizabeth Wesley September 27, 2011 at 11:50 AM Radiance exists in the heart of the poet and reaches out to the reader as you did to mine. Lovely verse to share Tim! :)

Sara Kendrick September 26, 2011 at 7:01 PM Very poetic and passionate work..Enjoyed reading this eve..Thanks for the kind review of my work..Sara

Linda-Marie Sweetheart September 26, 2011 at 3:22 PM tender beauty in this piece Tim and such a devoted poem to extol all the lovely qualities of Liselle.. luv in both realms of life is the real beauty of luv's emotion my friend.. lovely language here..