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Lisa's Ivory Music Box

Many Christmas stories are told every year, and many songs are sung with pure cheer; do I have a good story, at least one, I can tell, or a simple song I can hum and spread good will? When Lisa's grandmother passed away unexpectedly... by her dying bed she kept an ivory music box, and to her lovely granddaughter she gave it to saying," Take care of it, and smile when you think of me!" The day after granny died, she went down the dark cellar to hide the ivory music box in an old dresser's drawer, and once in a while she would open it and play it and listen to it sadly; the pretty angel swirled...and Silent Night played as Lisa touched it tenderly. It was almost Christmas Day and the pine tree wasn't decorated yet, she rushed outside carrying a red basket with ornaments in it; how could she had forgotten to adorn it with bulbs and garlands? " Oh gosh, I feel like the Grinch!" she displeasingly uttered to herself. There was no snow predicted for that evening and the illuminated town was lacking Nature's magical snowflakes to make it festive and vibrant; five minutes to midnight the choir from the nearest church gathered outside, and waited for a miracle...silence...tranquility...every heart felt so alone. But Lisa with an indomitable spirit ordered them to sing, and they began singing looking up the clearest, starriest sky; everyone seemed sad and some of them wanted to cry, but before sadness set in...snowflakes began falling. Lisa knew that it was the miracle she had been waiting for, but something was missing from the snowy scenery... she remembered her ivory music box she had put away, and running, with awe in her bright eyes, she opened the cellar's door... Clutched in her caring, careful hands, she carried the ivory music box, laid it gently underneath the twinkling, scented Christmas Tree; Lisa kissed it tenderly...until the golden angel started to swirl at midnight, as that divine music filled the nippy air...making all cheeks so peachy. Copyright 2009 by Andrew Crisci

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Date: 2/20/2010 5:38:00 PM
This is a very-well written story, Andrew. I enjoyed it. Congratulations on your win in the contest. ....Jimmy
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Date: 2/18/2010 9:29:00 AM
Congratulations on your win, Andrew. Sincere, Agape, Moses
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Date: 2/16/2010 1:12:00 AM
Well deserved to be placed among the winners, Andrew. This is so touching with happy ending. Congratulations. (^_^) Noel.
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Date: 2/12/2010 6:22:00 PM
Andrew, what a wonderful Christmas story this was indeed and I am so happy for your win. Blessings, Connie
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Date: 2/5/2010 7:14:00 PM
Congratulations on your win with this wonderful poem.
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Date: 2/4/2010 7:25:00 PM
Dear Andrew, Congratulations on YOUR very well deserved 2nd Place Win in Mac McGovern's Contest " Anything goes " A very Beautiful Tale of Christmas and the Miracle of the season Superb Write ALWAYS...HG
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Date: 2/4/2010 12:54:00 AM
You've really captured such a wonderful Christmas moment with this one, Andrew! Lots of congratulations on your win with this :) Smiles yet again L)
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Date: 2/3/2010 6:56:00 PM
Way to go Andrew! Congratulations on your winnning 2nd place in the contest! This is simply beautiful! Well deserved win! Peace, audrey
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Date: 2/3/2010 3:00:00 AM
Congratulations Andrew, on winning 2nd place in Mac McGovern’s “Anything Goes” Mini-Poetry contest with beautiful Christmas story. Your creativity has made you a winner. Smiles, Dane Ann
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Date: 2/2/2010 1:00:00 PM
A really sweet Christmas story there, Andrew. Congratulations for placing second in Mac's first big contest here at the Soup! Luv, Andrea
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Date: 2/2/2010 7:37:00 AM
Congratulations on your lovely poem and your win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 2/2/2010 4:50:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in the contest Andrew. May you have many more. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/2/2010 2:00:00 AM
A beautiful story Andrew, congratulations on you deserved win.....Margaret
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Date: 2/1/2010 9:01:00 PM
Congratulations on producing a terrific poem that gave you a big win in Matt's contest, Andrew! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 2/1/2010 7:49:00 PM
What a beautiful story. Congratulations on your second place finish in the Anything Goes contest. Well deserved. Keep up the good writing! Karen
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Date: 2/1/2010 4:42:00 PM
Congrats Andrew on your second place win in Mac's contest Anything Goes.. well written poem and a well deserved win... excellent.. luv.. Linda-Marie..
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Date: 2/1/2010 3:59:00 PM
Andrew, Congrats on placing 2nd in my contest. You have written a magnificent poem. Thank you for entering. Mac
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Date: 12/5/2009 2:09:00 AM
Sad write but happy ending. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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Date: 12/3/2009 7:44:00 AM
Oh, what a beautiful story, Andrew! So many miracles surround us daily but we hardly notice. Everyone's so busy! Peace and love, Audrey
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