Lisa and Herb

This is the story of Lisa & Herb
A young loving pair who lived in the burbs
Fresh cod she did cook
Forgot to take out the hook
Pierced at the lip he said it's superb
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Vaso Avatar
June 1, 2015 at 9:42 PM
Now thats love!!!!
Sathasivam Avatar
May 21, 2015 at 5:50 AM
Lovely limerick. Enjoyed. Tfs
Leiser Avatar
May 21, 2015 at 1:04 AM
Very funny limerick, Tim! Great write :)
Cervenka Avatar
May 20, 2015 at 9:04 PM
She stole his heart, hook line and sinker with her cooking...lol
Johnson Avatar
May 20, 2015 at 6:39 PM
I guess Herb could say it hurt so good. Very nice lim.
Allison Avatar
May 20, 2015 at 5:05 PM
lol Tim:-) Hugs jan xx
Allison Avatar
May 20, 2015 at 5:15 PM
I've written one hubby thinks its too suggestive lol hugs jan xx
Smith Avatar
May 20, 2015 at 5:09 PM
Take one....lol
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