Liberty Robbins Poet Alliteration

Liquor Lips

If I were the bottle 
You would press your lips to my neck nightly.
If I were the liquid
 You would consume me multiple.
But I am just a woman
Who needs your attention always. 
If only you could
Liquor lips.

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Poet Tacito January 13, 2012 at 6:28 PM Absolutely fantastic bit of lines here. Suddenly, I'm thirsty...hmm.

Robert Pettit January 13, 2012 at 4:29 PM In my state, we have to be at least twenty-one years of age to kiss liquor lips. They stopped asking for my ID at bars and liquor stores a long time ago. I see this work is featured this week. Congratulations!

Lizanne Scholtz January 11, 2012 at 7:09 AM Congratulations Liberty on this weeks win, keep up the good work. Elizabeth

Brent Cloyd January 9, 2012 at 12:22 PM Quite telling. Good job.

Anne-Lise Andresen January 9, 2012 at 10:53 AM Congratulations on the week`s win Liberty!! :) oxox love from Anne-Lise

Carol Sunshine Brown January 9, 2012 at 7:52 AM Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Liberty. I wish you the best in 2012 with your writing. Love, Carol

M.I.A . December 29, 2011 at 7:44 PM simple yet soo sweet

Carol Sunshine Brown December 28, 2011 at 6:29 AM I enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry this morning Liberty. I hope you will continue to write and share your poetry with us. Happy New Year. Love, Carol