Liquidity

Time becomes liquid when I’m with U
an endless torrent, rushing river & I imbibe it greedily
sucking down hours like minutes.

It runs down our bodies & 
sizzles our words 
Like pungent hot oil. 

It runs
Like mercury
smooth & easy
until it lands heavy in my conscience
a finite measure of our infinite joy.

Becomes wet concrete, slowing
Wishes  words  actions    thoughts       dreams

Solidifies into
duties, alarm clocks, books, responsibilities.

It hardens.
Creating the path that I tread upon, dragging my feet 
until it again becomes

A liquid endless torrent . . . rushing river

when I’m with U.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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January 22, 2013 at 3:29 PM
Mari, stopping by to read this poem again... I like the way you laid the watery image of melting by his side as time passes by... sometimes love can take so much away,,, greediness always steps in and wants more.... maybe we need to build a dam for the gushing river.... love this.... one again....PD
Roberts Avatar
January 14, 2013 at 5:56 PM
congrats Mari ....Seren
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January 13, 2013 at 7:55 PM
Congrats! ~SKAT
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January 13, 2013 at 6:27 PM
Mari,. ;-) Congratulations with your lovely poem. In Mystic Rose' "Be My Valentine" contest. Always~ PD
Banks Avatar
January 14, 2013 at 6:03 PM
Thank you for your support and thanks for taking the time to read it. It means a lot to me to be able to share my scribbles in such a warm environment.
Guzzi Avatar
January 13, 2013 at 2:50 PM
Yup I'm with Anne amazing! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
Magnet Avatar
January 10, 2013 at 8:16 PM
LIke the anology between romance and changeable aspects of elements,enjoyed and thanks for sharing.
Banks Avatar
January 14, 2013 at 6:00 PM
Yay! Im glad it made sense to you. Thanks Robert!
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