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Liquid Poetry

  When you find that special someone
who heartily & unconditionally
enraptures each second of every day,
makes life appear to be tangible liquid poetry
fantasies realize reality's passionateness,
thereupon adoringly kisses darkly euphoric
toffee eyes midst unveiling wildflowers,
whilst lavishing lush keepsake daisies
'tween unfurled silken tresses,
never take a moment for granted
such exquisite reveries are far and few,
soaring amongst boundlessness of
cosmoses' inconceivable flourish  

Copyright © Paloma P | Year Posted 2016

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Doug Vinson Date: 4/6/2017 9:58:00 PM Cheers, Paloma. : ) Indeed - "never take such a moment for granted." No doubt... Login to Reply

White Wolf Date: 11/29/2016 11:41:00 PM I thought I'd check out your first offering to the soup! And thought.... I recognize that style of writing! Don't take this the wrong way but you remind me of a magpie! In the sense that they have what seems to be an endless vocal tune! (I live in magpie territory so I constantly hear them) And as this poem so elegantly states we should not take anything for granted! Love your work it inspires me so. You and Chris both do, I wrote a poem today called, 'Man is that miracle' thinking of you both! Login to Reply

Lim'Rik Flats Date: 10/25/2016 9:16:00 PM Starting a study of your work from bottoms up. (the list, I mean) Intensity. I should not be surprised. Will proceed leisurely, to avoid exhaustion, allow for regeneration of brain cells, and, for savoring. This is going to be fun. btw, I like the "all-in-one-breathness" of this very much. Liquid, in a torrent. Cheers and choc'lits ~ j Login to Reply

Freddie Robinson Jr. Date: 10/21/2016 1:59:00 PM Beautiful debut, Paloma. Like the title song from a jazz giant Freddie Hubbard, "Liquid Love," that is what plays in my mind when I read this poem. Very melodious and sensual this poem is. Acck ... be gone Yoda. Pure liquid poetry. Much love to you and yours. RW. Login to Reply Paloma P Date: 10/22/2016 5:29:00 AM You might also like Roy Ayers of the same title. I always hear music playing in my head when I write. Thanks for your thoughts, much appreciate your attentiveness.

Daniel Turner Date: 10/19/2016 10:24:00 PM Congratulations Paloma for having your poem featured this week. Super write!! Login to Reply Paloma P Date: 10/20/2016 4:35:00 PM Thanks so much Daniel, much appreciate your kindness!

Vladislav Raven Date: 10/19/2016 4:47:00 PM Hi Paloma, i thought i should come back to your first poem on the soup and read some of your earlier work. One can find some special gems by looking back. Such an excellent piece of poetry for your first write Paloma. So beautifully written. Enraptures the heart and it brought peace to me as i did read. Brings such lovely thoughts to the canvas. U did say you could find gems and your first is just that. This is a definite seven and a fav. Hugs....Mike. XX Login to Reply Paloma P Date: 10/19/2016 5:25:00 PM You're a sweetheart Mike, thanks for such a lovely review, and bringing me back, seems I missed two reviews. Much appreciated! :)

Constance La France Date: 10/18/2016 1:17:00 AM Beautifully written and congratulations on having your poem featured this week Login to Reply Paloma P Date: 10/19/2016 5:27:00 PM Much appreciated BW, thanks so much.

Richard Lamoureux Date: 10/10/2016 9:47:00 AM A tremendous first offering. I hope you enjoy your time here. Login to Reply Paloma P Date: 10/19/2016 5:26:00 PM Thanks Richard, everyone's been kind, enjoyable group of poets.

Paul Callus Date: 10/10/2016 7:35:00 AM Full marks to you and to this beautiful poem, Paloma. Love can never be taken for granted, especially when it's this kind of 'special'! Impressed by your poetic language. // Paloma (dove) sounds Spanish to me...the surname Italian:) ~ Regards // paul Login to Reply Paloma P Date: 10/10/2016 7:55:00 AM Thanks Paul, much appreciate your lovely review. Yes, I'm a crossbreed, bit of Irish and French in there too or so I'm told. :)

Skat A Date: 10/7/2016 11:46:00 PM Paloma, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs **YNR - SKAT Login to Reply Paloma P Date: 10/8/2016 7:29:00 AM Thanks for the warm welcome SKAT. Still finding my way around this soup compound. 'newest poetry soup friend' I like that! :)

Chris Green Date: 10/6/2016 6:43:00 AM Forgot to rate this beauty. Login to Reply

Chris Green Date: 10/6/2016 6:34:00 AM There is so much truth in your poem Paloma. You have a very unique style that allows the reader to think and feel and see things in a completely different way. Indeed, we should not take anything for granted especially those who bring these feelings and desires and well, love to our worlds every day. Liquid Poetry, I love the title and absolutely adore the poem. Login to Reply Paloma P Date: 10/6/2016 2:43:00 PM Still trying to figure out this place, I nearly missed this glowing review, thanks so much Chris!

Poet Destroyer A Date: 10/5/2016 6:44:00 PM PS...Paloma, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@ Login to Reply Paloma P Date: 10/5/2016 6:48:00 PM Hello Linda, nice to meet you too. Thanks so much for the warm welcome. I always appreciate 'constructive' critiques, that's the only way we improve. I read one of yours write off the bat, not sure I had the right translation but it was intriguing and well written. Looking forward to reading more. :)

Poet Destroyer A Date: 10/5/2016 6:43:00 PM Hi Paloma, very good. So SO, happy you stopped by to visit me before I rolled out my welcome comment. Anyways, after reading this, I know you are very talented and not new to the world of poetry a hug and a 7 for your liquid entrance... LINDA Login to Reply Paloma P Date: 10/5/2016 6:49:00 PM Not new but always a work in progress! And wow, thanks so much for your generous review. Much appreciated my new poetic friend.