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Liquid Lines With Richard Lamoureux

His few liquid lines on solitary page Lessons he's learned Revealed with age He is unsure if he should let them go Yet onto the page they start to flow They drip towards her They call the Shadow Beyond his reach To another's mind Within his words what will she find It seems so hard To lose control Releasing a part of his inner soul She accepts his gift His words held within her hand They are now hers She takes command If he lets her he will understand Words create the shape of her mystical land Losing control will help set him free It's her path but their journey Secrets to share and places to see The thing about liquid It can flow both ways Shadow to light Night to day From her mind back to his own Connected together they don't feel alone Mystical discovery metaphorical hand They bridge the distance they both understand Led to her world of mystery A blend of excitement some insanity She offers strength with words she sings These are but a few of the gifts she brings Wondrous images sacred to her Cause his rigid lines to begin to blur Serenity and peace his spirit free Within her Shadow she lets him be Their minds now joined by silken strands Strong and elegant she understands A Shadowlam production. Brought to you by Shadow Hamilton and Richard Lamoureux. Thank you Richard for your liquid lines and for letting me join in the fun of cobbling it together with you. It is a pleasure and honour to write with you.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 10/29/2013 3:12:00 PM
WOW... Brilliant and powerful mix. So well stated. The effects of one's mind to influence another, whom we've never met in person, has got to be the ultimate gift. Applause to you both !
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 10/30/2013 6:23:00 AM
Hi Karen and TY hard sometimes as in a way you are passing power to the other writer Rick made it easy glad you enjoyed it Shadow x smile hugs
Date: 10/25/2013 3:09:00 PM
Nice poem, my lovely friend. Loved always, bl
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 10/25/2013 5:41:00 PM
hi BL and tnx for reading and your review Shadow x smile
Date: 10/23/2013 4:04:00 PM
beautiful job.....love Skat
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 10/23/2013 5:23:00 PM
Ty Skat it seems to work hugs Shadow x smile
Date: 10/23/2013 1:35:00 PM
This was quite a poem. It scared me at times. Great work, keep writing. Also, keep your muse happy.
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 10/23/2013 5:25:00 PM
hi Jancari yes giving control to someone else is scarey especially with your words and thoughts. TY for your time in reading Shadow x smile
Date: 10/22/2013 7:58:00 PM
I think this is very well cobbled lol, seems we have a crack writing team here, I enjoyed your other collab as much as this one, which symbolizes all that is great in working together. Take care both, Richard
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 10/23/2013 11:16:00 AM
hi Richard so happy you like it Richard is great to work with Shadow x smile
Date: 10/22/2013 6:30:00 PM
The pleasure was mine Shadow have a good night.
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