Dr.Ram Mehta Poet Verse

Liquid Jewelry

dew drops on flower
glittering gems of morning
mourning tears of eve

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May 18, 2014
Form: Haiku - haikuette
Dr. Ram Mehta
Second Place win
Contest: Three lines are fine by Debbie Guzzi

* haikuette
* 17 syllables or less NO specific # of syllables per line
* NO VERBS
* UNRHYMED
* TITLED

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Robin Davis July 6, 2014 at 1:53 PM Dr. Ram A very descriptive and sweet write. The imagery allows me to see this happening. Thank you for the great comment on my Lies And Guys poem.

Sandip Goswami June 9, 2014 at 4:57 AM Interesting...." mourning tears of eve "...Super...

Poet Destroyer A June 8, 2014 at 8:06 PM Hi Dr Ram, Congratulations, on your win.......LUV* LINDA

Skat A June 8, 2014 at 8:00 AM DR...., :) Enjoyed the 3 lines. Congrats on the win. Love ~SKAT~

Robert Lindley June 2, 2014 at 8:17 AM A truly great write my friend!! Congrats on the win!!!!!

Shadow Hamilton June 2, 2014 at 6:50 AM superb poem Ram congrats on win hugs

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser June 1, 2014 at 4:04 PM WOW!!!! i love the imagery and the refreshing statement.. :D! kudos Sir.. :)

Reason A. Poteet June 1, 2014 at 3:49 PM definitive brevity with interesting word play, congratulations, Dr. Ram on your fine example of haikuette. A lovely three line poem too.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma June 1, 2014 at 11:25 AM Wonderful write Dr Ram ! I hv never worked on this form ! Congrats on great win !

Joseph May June 1, 2014 at 9:24 AM Nice write and win Dr Ram...congrats

Mohan Chutani June 1, 2014 at 8:07 AM Congratulations on the win Dr. Ram.

Andrea Dietrich May 31, 2014 at 11:27 PM this is very nice. In fact, a beauty~~

Pandita Sietesantos May 31, 2014 at 11:03 PM Beautiful write! Congratulations on your win!

Joyce Johnson May 31, 2014 at 8:48 PM Cleverly done. Congratulations. Love, Joyce

Faye Gibson May 27, 2014 at 8:39 AM I find this so lovely....the title is a grand preview.

Richard Lamoureux May 21, 2014 at 8:16 AM This is quite good, I am not familiar with the form but I think the poem is very good.

Joe Maverick May 21, 2014 at 1:00 AM Well I would place this highly were it a contest I were running Dr Ram, so good to have stopped by..'

Deborah Shiells May 19, 2014 at 11:59 AM Hi Dr. Ram, This is very lovely. Best of the best in the contest. Thanks for sharing this write. Love and Peace, Deborah

Debbie Guzzi May 18, 2014 at 8:11 PM Ram please label your verse haikuette on the bottom. THANKS! Light & Love Dr.Ram Mehta May 19, 2014 at 1:27 AM Thanks, done

David Mohn May 18, 2014 at 6:51 PM Very nice Haiku Dr. Ram

Jack Horne May 18, 2014 at 2:15 PM touching haiku, dr ram

Anne-Lise Andresen May 18, 2014 at 1:51 PM - A beautiful picture from the nature, Dr. Ram! - Luck in contest ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Muhammad Safa Thajudeen May 18, 2014 at 10:16 AM I enjoyed the poem.