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Lips Touch

When we wake at dawn Languidly and Longingly When we part for a time Avidly and Ardently When we make love Passionately and Powerfully When we fight and Make-up Vehemently and Vigorously When we lay in the dark Sedately and Serenely We move through the day To come alive When our lips touch

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/31/2012 11:01:00 PM

AWESOME last couplet there and I enjoyed the alliteration throughout.

Michele Ortiz
Date: 2/1/2012 8:14:00 AM

Thank you so much. I'm glad you enjoyed this :)

Gwendolen Song

Date: 1/31/2012 2:13:00 PM

Another romance poet hits the scene!! Fun one. Very intense. Gwendolen

Michele Ortiz
Date: 1/31/2012 2:47:00 PM

Are too many romance poets on the scene? No way...who can get too much of romance? :) Thank you for your comment!

David Williams

Date: 1/31/2012 10:09:00 AM

Michele, like this, secreting Alliteration..David

Michele Ortiz
Date: 1/31/2012 10:26:00 AM

Thanks, I changed it from Free Verse to Alliteration :)

Andrew Crisci

Date: 1/31/2012 10:08:00 AM

Hi, Michele. Welcome to Poetry Soup. You have only posted a few poems, and they are amazing! In this poem, you express your feelings with tenderness by showing your romantic side. I wish success in your writing endeavors. Have a wonderful day. Peace and Love, Andrew.

Michele Ortiz
Date: 1/31/2012 10:25:00 AM

Thank you so much for your compliment! It seems we both wrote about the same subject but you wrote it so much better :)

John Rhinem

Date: 1/31/2012 9:52:00 AM

Ps. Smile ˜ Thank you, my dear precious & priceless, beautiful Michele ˜ I appreciate your kind visit & tis nice to be kisssed in the warmth of anothers lips * Love, John!:) ˜

Michele Ortiz
Date: 1/31/2012 10:19:00 AM

I loved, "You and Me." Thank you for writing it :)

John Rhinem

Date: 1/31/2012 8:07:00 AM

Smile ˜ You know someday your bound to leave her but for now your going to stay, in the year of the cat * Tis very nice beautiful Michelle, to awaken everyday wrapped within the joyful arms of love ˜ Takes away the gray and shades the pangs and brings, smiles in colours unto ones heart ˜ Long live love, Always, John!:) ˜

Michele Ortiz
Date: 1/31/2012 9:18:00 AM

Thank you so much for your lovely comment. I'm so glad you enjoyed reading my little poem :)