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Lips Touch

When we wake at dawn
Languidly and Longingly

When we part for a time
Avidly and Ardently

When we make love
Passionately and Powerfully

When we fight and Make-up
Vehemently and Vigorously

When we lay in the dark
Sedately and Serenely

We move through the day
To come alive
When our lips touch

Copyright © Michele Ortiz | Year Posted 2012

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Andrea Dietrich Date: 1/31/2012 11:01:00 PM AWESOME last couplet there and I enjoyed the alliteration throughout. Login to Reply Michele Ortiz Date: 2/1/2012 8:14:00 AM Thank you so much. I'm glad you enjoyed this :)

Gwendolen Song Date: 1/31/2012 2:13:00 PM Another romance poet hits the scene!! Fun one. Very intense. Gwendolen Login to Reply Michele Ortiz Date: 1/31/2012 2:47:00 PM Are too many romance poets on the scene? No way...who can get too much of romance? :) Thank you for your comment!

David Williams Date: 1/31/2012 10:09:00 AM Michele, like this, secreting Alliteration..David Login to Reply Michele Ortiz Date: 1/31/2012 10:26:00 AM Thanks, I changed it from Free Verse to Alliteration :)

Andrew Crisci Date: 1/31/2012 10:08:00 AM Hi, Michele. Welcome to Poetry Soup. You have only posted a few poems, and they are amazing! In this poem, you express your feelings with tenderness by showing your romantic side. I wish success in your writing endeavors. Have a wonderful day. Peace and Love, Andrew. Login to Reply Michele Ortiz Date: 1/31/2012 10:25:00 AM Thank you so much for your compliment! It seems we both wrote about the same subject but you wrote it so much better :)

John Rhinem Date: 1/31/2012 9:52:00 AM Ps. Smile ˜ Thank you, my dear precious & priceless, beautiful Michele ˜ I appreciate your kind visit & tis nice to be kisssed in the warmth of anothers lips * Love, John!:) ˜ Login to Reply Michele Ortiz Date: 1/31/2012 10:19:00 AM I loved, "You and Me." Thank you for writing it :)

John Rhinem Date: 1/31/2012 8:07:00 AM Smile ˜ You know someday your bound to leave her but for now your going to stay, in the year of the cat * Tis very nice beautiful Michelle, to awaken everyday wrapped within the joyful arms of love ˜ Takes away the gray and shades the pangs and brings, smiles in colours unto ones heart ˜ Long live love, Always, John!:) ˜ Login to Reply Michele Ortiz Date: 1/31/2012 9:18:00 AM Thank you so much for your lovely comment. I'm so glad you enjoyed reading my little poem :)