Michele Ortiz Poet Alliteration

Lips Touch

When we wake at dawn
Languidly and Longingly

When we part for a time
Avidly and Ardently

When we make love
Passionately and Powerfully

When we fight and Make-up
Vehemently and Vigorously

When we lay in the dark
Sedately and Serenely

We move through the day
To come alive
When our lips touch

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Andrea Dietrich January 31, 2012 at 11:01 PM AWESOME last couplet there and I enjoyed the alliteration throughout. Michele Ortiz February 1, 2012 at 8:14 AM Thank you so much. I'm glad you enjoyed this :)

Gwendolen Song January 31, 2012 at 2:13 PM Another romance poet hits the scene!! Fun one. Very intense. Gwendolen Michele Ortiz January 31, 2012 at 2:47 PM Are too many romance poets on the scene? No way...who can get too much of romance? :) Thank you for your comment!

David Williams January 31, 2012 at 10:09 AM Michele, like this, secreting Alliteration..David Michele Ortiz January 31, 2012 at 10:26 AM Thanks, I changed it from Free Verse to Alliteration :)

Andrew Crisci January 31, 2012 at 10:08 AM Hi, Michele. Welcome to Poetry Soup. You have only posted a few poems, and they are amazing! In this poem, you express your feelings with tenderness by showing your romantic side. I wish success in your writing endeavors. Have a wonderful day. Peace and Love, Andrew. Michele Ortiz January 31, 2012 at 10:25 AM Thank you so much for your compliment! It seems we both wrote about the same subject but you wrote it so much better :)

John Rhinem January 31, 2012 at 9:52 AM Ps. Smile ˜ Thank you, my dear precious & priceless, beautiful Michele ˜ I appreciate your kind visit & tis nice to be kisssed in the warmth of anothers lips * Love, John!:) ˜ Michele Ortiz January 31, 2012 at 10:19 AM I loved, "You and Me." Thank you for writing it :)

John Rhinem January 31, 2012 at 8:07 AM Smile ˜ You know someday your bound to leave her but for now your going to stay, in the year of the cat * Tis very nice beautiful Michelle, to awaken everyday wrapped within the joyful arms of love ˜ Takes away the gray and shades the pangs and brings, smiles in colours unto ones heart ˜ Long live love, Always, John!:) ˜ Michele Ortiz January 31, 2012 at 9:18 AM Thank you so much for your lovely comment. I'm so glad you enjoyed reading my little poem :)