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Lips That Quiver

Quiet baby wakes and wants thirst quenched. That why his lips quiver? 04/06/2017 For Broken Wing's Form Q contest.

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Ts Poetry

Date: 10/20/2019 11:36:00 AM

Aren't we all just babies at heart. Lol cheers

Jean Murray
Date: 10/20/2019 1:13:00 PM

Certainly this evening TS. My mother in law passed away today. I am crying like a baby. She was such a beautiful soul.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 6/14/2017 7:05:00 AM

Jean, I always used humor to dissuade my babies from crying. Cute poem and probably why baby is crying. : )

Jean Murray
Date: 6/14/2017 1:30:00 PM

Hi Connie.Lovely to see you.

Eve Roper

Date: 6/7/2017 6:51:00 PM

I with Victor that poor baby. I couldn't stand a baby cry that is probably why my sons are spoiled. Good Luck in the contest ~*

Jean Murray
Date: 6/8/2017 4:15:00 AM

Thank you Eve. I breast fed mine until they were two and a half. It was always so handy for any quivering lip episodes.

Tim Smith

Date: 6/6/2017 5:30:00 PM

Hurry...she needs you

Jean Murray
Date: 6/6/2017 5:47:00 PM

As you know Tim, they are all out of reach now. Sob.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/6/2017 5:19:00 PM

what a cute idea to go with Questionku. It did not even occur to me!!

Jean Murray
Date: 6/6/2017 5:44:00 PM

I'm so lazy Andrea, it looked like the easy option.

Juli- Michelle

Date: 6/6/2017 4:30:00 PM

Very interesting! Love, Juli-Michelle

Jean Murray
Date: 6/6/2017 5:42:00 PM

Thank you Juli.

Darren White

Date: 6/5/2017 3:29:00 AM

I think that's why, yes, or because of the picture taken :) Good luck, Jean.

Jean Murray
Date: 6/5/2017 11:58:00 AM

Something is certainly amiss Darren! Thank you for your visit.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/4/2017 12:02:00 PM

- Jean ... a sweet baby ... even with crying and trembling lips :) - Luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jean Murray
Date: 6/4/2017 1:49:00 PM

I am blessed to work with babies all day Anna-Lise. Bathing them and helping them to latch. No two days are ever the same. Thank you for your good wishes.

Jan Allison

Date: 6/4/2017 9:07:00 AM

aww what an adorable pic and poem Jean:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx

Jean Murray
Date: 6/4/2017 1:47:00 PM

Thank you so much Jan. Another fun one to write.