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Lips of Velvet Touch

Her lips of luster Scarlet rose scented petals Velvet to the touch http://www.thehighlanderspoems.com/love5.php

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 10/9/2009 7:20:00 PM
WOW!
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Date: 9/2/2009 12:04:00 AM
Nice work James, love the last line...Raul
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Date: 9/1/2009 12:48:00 PM
this is an excellent haiku...........her velvet touch touched you,,,charma
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Date: 8/29/2009 3:34:00 PM
Beautiful touch James,...is it not wonderful when we can portrait with pen and slip ? !!! Bravo ! james
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Date: 8/28/2009 10:10:00 PM
I made this comment into a Senryu titled "Beauties Rounded Bottom"......:JP}
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Date: 8/28/2009 3:42:00 PM
Interesting. Keep writing. Sara
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Date: 8/28/2009 1:20:00 PM
With eyes of beauty,,,Powder blue rounded petals,,,,Silky is her bum................. Awesome Haiku friend......:JP]
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