Lips of Velvet Touch

Her lips of luster Scarlet rose scented petals Velvet to the touch http://www.thehighlanderspoems.com/love5.php
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Jenkins Avatar
October 9, 2009 at 7:20 PM
WOW!
Moreno Avatar
September 2, 2009 at 12:04 AM
Nice work James, love the last line...Raul
Chircop Avatar
September 1, 2009 at 12:48 PM
this is an excellent haiku...........her velvet touch touched you,,,charma
Peranteau Avatar
August 29, 2009 at 3:34 PM
Beautiful touch James,...is it not wonderful when we can portrait with pen and slip ? !!! Bravo ! james
Pickett Avatar
August 28, 2009 at 10:10 PM
I made this comment into a Senryu titled "Beauties Rounded Bottom"......:JP}
Kendrick Avatar
August 28, 2009 at 3:42 PM
Interesting. Keep writing. Sara
Pickett Avatar
August 28, 2009 at 1:20 PM
With eyes of beauty,,,Powder blue rounded petals,,,,Silky is her bum................. Awesome Haiku friend......:JP]
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