Line Gauthier Poet Than-Bauk

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Lips of Honey

deity kissed
amethyst sweet
dismissed adieu



AP: Honorable Mention 2022

Submitted on January 27, 2019 for contest ANY THEME THAN-BAUK sponsored by CHARLES MESSINA  -  RANKED 2ND

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Jan Allison February 13, 2019 at 3:39 PM love the rhyme Line:-) many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx Line Gauthier February 13, 2019 at 5:26 PM Thanks for your visit and comment, Jan.

Charles Messina February 11, 2019 at 7:44 AM I really like this one, Line. Wonderful job with this form. Congratulations on your placement in my contest my friend. hugs Charlie Line Gauthier February 11, 2019 at 7:53 AM Thanks, Charlie. Fun contest.

Carolyn Devonshire February 11, 2019 at 6:08 AM A thought-provoking Than Bauk composed in perfect form, Line. Congratulations on your win in Charlie's contest! Hugs, Carolyn Line Gauthier February 11, 2019 at 7:17 AM Thank you so much, Carolyn. Much appreciated.

Edward Ibeh February 11, 2019 at 5:24 AM Lovely, Line!:-) Congratulations on your win! Line Gauthier February 11, 2019 at 7:16 AM Thank you, Edward. Much appreciated.

Gershon Wolf January 31, 2019 at 11:18 PM What an intriguing message and rhyme scheme. G.L. in the contest, Line. :) gw Line Gauthier February 1, 2019 at 2:40 PM I aimed to confuse with this one and was obviously successful. LOL

Andrea Dietrich January 29, 2019 at 3:10 PM Love this! Line Gauthier January 29, 2019 at 5:46 PM Thanks, Andrea. Much appreciated.

Michelle Faulkner January 28, 2019 at 1:25 PM Love the unusual rhymes you did, such a sweet mystery - best of luck in the contest! Line Gauthier January 28, 2019 at 3:26 PM Thank you so much, Michelle. Much appreciated.