Lips

A Red Rose her mouth An upturned curve a pout Two waves that rise The shape of her lips She holds loves confluence At the very tips Beautiful thoughts That burn below Releasing a kiss Nice and slow Layers of nectar On two petals A scented taste Which unsettles. 1.2.2021 A Sensual Poem.

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Kim Rodrigues

Date: 2/10/2021 4:51:00 AM

Ooh la la, Carol! I love it! Congratulations!

Carol Mitra
Date: 2/10/2021 5:48:00 AM

Thank you dear Kim...once again hugs :)

Charlotte Puddifoot

Date: 2/8/2021 8:04:00 AM

i really liked this little rhyming poem, economical with the language but clever, i like how you built a poem around that single image..i almost read a double meaning in some of the lines but maybe it's my naughty mind haha (i love double meanings in a poem) congrats on your win in my contest! :)

Carol Mitra
Date: 2/8/2021 8:46:00 AM

Thanks dear Charlotte.....ha ha...yes when I read it over I thought so too...but let the poem flow....Oops here now I did it again :))Much appreciated.

Brian Sambourne

Date: 2/8/2021 7:52:00 AM

A superb piece. That final line is memorable. Well done, indeed. Regards, Brian

Carol Mitra
Date: 2/8/2021 7:57:00 AM

Thank you Brian....much appreciated.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 2/1/2021 5:22:00 AM

Love it!

Carol Mitra
Date: 2/1/2021 5:42:00 AM

Thank you Kim :)