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Lip Service

lips steaming, hot brands my sultry skin - searing me forever sizzled Susan Ashley August 2, 2017 N/A Contest: Wonderful One Liners Sponsor: s. grace

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Paul Callus

Date: 12/6/2017 4:30:00 AM

A sizzling hot one-liner, the effects of which have left you branded for life, Susan! This brings back to mind my 3 liner Chilli Pepper. ~ Have a lovely day:) Warm regards // paul

Susan Ashley
Date: 12/6/2017 7:25:00 AM

Paul, thank you for your 'sizzling' response to my poem. I find these short forms to be so potent in concentrated imagery. I will have to pop on to your page to read your poem Chilli Pepper.. Warmest wishes always dear friend.. ~Susan

Silent One

Date: 11/9/2017 3:55:00 PM

Ooooh... Great one liner Susan...

Susan Ashley
Date: 11/9/2017 6:19:00 PM

Thank you Silent One. I'm happy you enjoyed my poem. Your visits are always received with pleasure and appreciation.. ~Susan

Arturo Michael

Date: 8/29/2017 6:05:00 AM

I don't know the names of the different types of poems but this line is hot like pepper... Good one...Enjoyed it...Have a nice day Susan...

Susan Ashley
Date: 8/29/2017 12:15:00 PM

Hi Arturo, thank you so much for appreciating my spicy poem! I always enjoy and appreciate your visit and unique and special comments so much! I hope you are having a beautiful day!! :)

Corwin Donovan

Date: 8/2/2017 9:21:00 AM

Have to love the monoku haiku and this is one of the tops. Terrific work.

Susan Ashley
Date: 8/2/2017 9:45:00 PM

Hi Corwin, thank you so much for the encouragement!