Lip Service

Imagining that first kiss
Butterflies dance in my soul
Coyly you invite me in
Our lips seal the deal
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Mehta Avatar
January 25, 2011 at 3:52 AM
Congrats Joe on big win with this juicy one. Was away travelling hence delay in wishing. Luv / Best wishes Hitendra Mehta
Brown Avatar
January 23, 2011 at 8:10 AM
Congratulations Joe, on your win in the "Spicy" contest sponsored by Linda-Marie. Love, Carol
Pettit Avatar
January 22, 2011 at 6:59 PM
Wonderful presentation! No wonder it was chosen among the winners.
Mehta Avatar
January 22, 2011 at 3:00 PM
Congratulations on the third place win in the contest of Linda, Joe
Dietrich Avatar
January 22, 2011 at 1:43 PM
CUTE line, our lips seal the deal! a Big congratulations on your spicy win. LUv ,Andrea
Calhoun Avatar
January 22, 2011 at 4:13 AM
Hi Joe - Congrats on your BIG WIN in the contest. Best wishes, KC
Freeman Avatar
January 21, 2011 at 8:46 PM
Congratulations Joe, on your worthy #3 place, Agape, Moses
Sweetheart Avatar
January 21, 2011 at 7:44 PM
Congrats Joe on your success in my Spicy for men only contest with this thrilling and exhilarating entry luv.. thankxx for supporting my contests...
Neels Avatar
January 7, 2011 at 12:08 PM
Awe what an interesting way to seal the deal Joe.. Aptly titled as well.. You sure got your point across with the butterflies line.. Good luck for the contest.. :) hope the shower helped lol
Brown Avatar
January 7, 2011 at 10:59 AM
i remembered mine. such good bad memories. thatn you for bringing them back.
Shango Avatar
December 30, 2010 at 2:56 PM
Joe, this is neat, a complete beauty with its circle closed expertly.
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December 30, 2010 at 8:46 AM
love the last line, enjoyed your write on Lip Service Joe,..p.d.
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