Gideon Foli Poet Tail-rhyme

Lionel Messi

Horrendously explosive nimble ball juggler
Athletic and Ever-Attacking game shuffler
Maradona upgraded and improved version
Awesomely admiring soccer surgeon
Ruthless with the heart and strength of a Lion
Devours the opponent with the boot of an iron

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Paul Callus April 22, 2020 at 4:20 PM Seems like you are also a football expert, Gideon (Hebrew name?). Messi is definitely one of the very best; he makes good use of the talents he was endowed and blessed with. ~ Best regards // paul

Andrea Dietrich April 20, 2020 at 4:39 PM boot of iron, such a cool phrase for defining his leg!! I know nothing of this sport or the players but I really like how you wrote this. Gideon Foli April 22, 2020 at 2:02 AM Thank you Andrea. I enjoyed your poems too.

Ovidiu Bocsa July 15, 2015 at 3:55 AM It is an athletic poem about a world entire who lives in your soul, but not at random, because you are predestined for much more.Congrat. Gideon Foli January 9, 2016 at 1:30 AM Thanks for the word of encouragement. Love from me to you.