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Lion Without a Mane

Leo, the Lion was so sad He wanted a mane just like his dad. But he never grew one about his face, So he slinked around in dismal disgrace. He went to the grove and searched the brooks And saw what was missing from his looks. All other males from big to least Sported a mane like the King of Beasts. He’d run away to a menagerie Or join some zoo across the sea. They never knew just where he went Gone so long they began to lament. One day a strange lion came along; Females admired him, so virile and strong. He roared real loud and showed his claws All girl lions gave him applause. They cheered him on with eyes aglow More of this stranger they wanted to know. It was Leo the Lion, not timid and plain, But rather handsome in his store-bought mane.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 11/23/2016 1:11:00 PM
A lovely and entertaining poem with an end twist. #7 // paul
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James Tate
Date: 11/23/2016 3:04:00 PM
While I cannot claim such subtle and intense skills as you, I like to put a surprise at the end of my work, but I don't always manage to do so. Thanks for stopping by. jt
Date: 7/27/2015 10:43:00 PM
Great last line! Truly enjoyed reading this one! A7
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James Tate
Date: 7/28/2015 4:45:00 PM
Robert this is one of my favorites. Thanks for your nice comment.
Date: 7/1/2015 1:10:00 AM
Hahaha! I would never have guessed your last line... Julia, xx
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James Tate
Date: 7/1/2015 6:42:00 AM
Thanks Julia for dropping by.
Date: 6/23/2015 4:39:00 PM
Excellent penned Tare this is so so funny and beautiful........A..M.
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James Tate
Date: 6/23/2015 5:13:00 PM
Thanks Afolabi. I have corrected the misspelled last word--mane.

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