Lion Without a Mane

Leo, the Lion was so sad
He wanted a mane just like his dad.
But he never grew one about his face,
So he slinked around in dismal disgrace.

He went to the grove and searched the brooks
And saw what was missing from his looks.
All other males from big to least
Sported a mane like the King of Beasts.

He’d run away to a menagerie
Or join some zoo across the sea.
They never knew just where he went
Gone so long they began to lament.

One day a strange lion came along;
Females admired him, so virile and strong.
He roared real loud and showed his claws
All girl lions gave him applause.

They cheered him on with eyes aglow
More of this stranger they wanted to know.
It was Leo the Lion, not timid and plain,
But rather handsome in his store-bought mane.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Callus Avatar
November 23, 2016 at 1:11 PM
A lovely and entertaining poem with an end twist. #7 // paul
Tate Avatar
November 23, 2016 at 3:04 PM
While I cannot claim such subtle and intense skills as you, I like to put a surprise at the end of my work, but I don't always manage to do so. Thanks for stopping by. jt
Lindley Avatar
July 27, 2015 at 10:43 PM
Great last line! Truly enjoyed reading this one! A7
Tate Avatar
July 28, 2015 at 4:45 PM
Robert this is one of my favorites. Thanks for your nice comment.
Ward Avatar
July 1, 2015 at 1:10 AM
Hahaha! I would never have guessed your last line... Julia, xx
Tate Avatar
July 1, 2015 at 6:42 AM
Thanks Julia for dropping by.
Muideen Avatar
June 23, 2015 at 4:39 PM
Excellent penned Tare this is so so funny and beautiful........A..M.
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June 23, 2015 at 5:13 PM
Thanks Afolabi. I have corrected the misspelled last word--mane.
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