Eve Roper Poet Personification

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Lion

In the valley of tall golden fire, I rest 

listening to the sound of the earth heartbeat. 

Africa's eastern breath presses its cheek against mine 

as I bask and savor the exotic serene moment. 



I listen and watch at the tapestry of wildlife gather, 

a world of tranquil beauty. 

Together we forge a strong valley, 

but still a world of survival; nowhere is truly safe.


4/30/2019

Poetry Contest: 'Writing Challenge 4, May 2019, No Placement' 
Sponsored By: Dear Heart

"Lion" received an N/A on 5/3/2019 in the contest; MAY 2019 PREMIER 1 ANY THEME, ANY FORM,UP TO A MAX OF 14

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Jan Allison June 2, 2019 at 2:38 PM your imagery is exquisite and you send out a powerful message, sadly these creatures are not safe from man as a predator:-( hugs Jan xx

Constance La France June 2, 2019 at 11:32 AM Eve, congratulations on your win in my writing challenge with this wonderful poem ~

Connie Marcum Wong June 2, 2019 at 12:02 AM I remember I loved this so much I faved it Eve. I can't believe it did not place. I am happy to see it in a deserving First Place in Constance's contest. Congratulations! xxoo : )

Geoffrey Brewer May 11, 2019 at 9:20 PM Powerful imagery beautifully outlined in words. Well done, Eve

Darlene De Beaulieu May 10, 2019 at 1:32 PM Hello Eve Roper, you are right the lion has nowhere to be safe. have a nice day my friend.

David Smith May 5, 2019 at 11:36 AM Impressive. Also see a strong message about living life and not letting fear rule. If we worry about being safe too much we might miss out on scenes like you have so aptly painted and being happy. Best regards David in NZ

Winged Warrior May 2, 2019 at 7:08 PM Oh!, well done my friend...one would say you are a great poetess...I'm saying that!...lovely verse Eve...bol...happy lioness endings...^WW^...{*J*}

Connie Marcum Wong May 1, 2019 at 3:57 PM This awe inspiring poem gave me chills! Your imagery and the feelings this beauty provoked brought tears Eve. I absolutely loved this poem! A fave from me. : ) xxoo

Jennifer Proxenos May 1, 2019 at 10:26 AM This is a truly African scene and poem - you should visit South Africa you would love our Kruger National park where you will see lions wild and in their own habitat - An awesome getaway, wonderful write and example Eve - I love wildlife and especially anything to do with lions. Hugs, Jenny

Kim Rodrigues May 1, 2019 at 6:28 AM Such beauty! The images personal, strong and yet vulnerable. You are going straight to the top! :) Fave

Tom Cunningham May 1, 2019 at 3:32 AM I agree with Victor, a winner for sure lol. Brilliant example Eve. Tom

Caren Krutsinger May 1, 2019 at 12:20 AM You have just won all kinds of awards and contests with this one, Eve. It is exquisite!