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Lingering Still

A breathtaking moment unfolds, like a beautiful incredible tableau I am lingering still, just reminiscing about love . . And the first thing you notice will never be, the moon's glitter placing me in a spotlight, or even the waves dancing wildly with glee It will always be . . The way I captivated your heart ~~~~~~~~~~ - Do you feel the fluttering of mine? -

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Joseph May

Date: 1/8/2024 12:28:00 AM

You hold his heart captive with a special glow, Wonderful write Brandy, hugs

Brandy Nicole
Date: 1/8/2024 7:22:00 PM

Thank you, Joseph. I like that, ' holding a heart captive with a special glow. ' :) So beautiful and romantic. I appreciate you and your lovely comment. :) Hugs, Brandy

Gregory Richard Barden

Date: 9/8/2018 12:28:00 AM

Very romantic and tenderly wan, like the moonlight that paints you, porcelain ... love this one, my friend, and I am so thankful that you led me here! (Your name is Maia? Very beautiful). Blessings ... and may the moon find you - the lanyard to those we can't be with, and the wash of wonder! :-) <3

Brandy Nicole
Date: 9/8/2018 12:18:00 PM

This is a favorite of mine, because of this fact- the moonlight being a spotlight. Even though I am a bit shy, with being placed in the center- where everyone can see. Your thoughts are wonderful and I appreciate you. Maia is my username. :) Brandy

Tobey Hill

Date: 7/19/2018 2:58:00 PM

You have a poets heart and I have enjoyed reading it's treasures. Thank you for the kind words left on mine...TAH

Brandy Nicole
Date: 7/19/2018 3:11:00 PM

Thank you. Such a wonderful thing to say. I enjoyed writing this. I appreciate you reading so many of my poems. You are welcome for the thoughts placed upon yours. ~ Brandy

Lyric Man

Date: 6/29/2018 3:51:00 PM

I could watch the tide gently caressing the shore as if it were your skin all day. Intermingled with this, baby waves of rush, as if kissing you passionately all over. Then I look up and see you wadding in the water. Suddenly no more analogies. I can't even think. Spellbound. Perfection is smiling at me........

Brandy Nicole
Date: 6/29/2018 5:36:00 PM

Thank you Lyric Man. Your thoughts could be placed to music, so easily. This could the beginning of a song. Simply mesmerizing, playful and passionate. I am smiling and blushing. :) Brandy

Sylvia Coulstock

Date: 6/26/2018 5:46:00 PM

Another truly lovely poem Maiai.You captivate the heart with your words.Magical!

Brandy Nicole
Date: 6/26/2018 6:46:00 PM

Thank you SYLVIA. I am happy that you enjoyed this poem. Your thoughts are appreciated. ~ Maia (Brandy)

Robert Lindley

Date: 6/23/2018 12:55:00 PM

I truly love both the great poetry and the fine music.. This choice of music flows so well with the exceptional and captivating poetry! A fav my friend, such exquisite and inspirational combination...

Brandy Nicole
Date: 6/23/2018 4:10:00 PM

Thank you Robert. Music is the sweet melody that truly sets each moment in place. Your kind words are appreciated. I am humbled that you have chosen this as a favorite. ~ Brandy