Lingering Memories JU

Rain clouds every moment beat,
bursting full at my bare feet
as lovesickness redefines.
Years passed like ascending vines.

Its trimmings bind, soar aloft,
then linger and gently waft.
A faint whisper sign of hope
falls beyond the narrow scope.

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Sara Kendrick

March 20, 2026 at 5:09 PM

Creative winning work in Charles' contest. Way to go. Congratulations to you. Sara K

Rob Carmack

March 20, 2026 at 5:20 AM

One of my favorites from his contest, congrats.

Charles Messina

March 19, 2026 at 3:20 AM

So lovely, Eve. Amazing how years pass- "Like ascending vines" but all too quickly. Congratulations on your placement in my contest! Thank you for entering. Charlie

Linda Alice Fowler

March 18, 2026 at 11:17 AM

Fine memories and writing Eve. Congratulations! :)

Andrea Dietrich

March 17, 2026 at 9:35 AM

Loved it the first time! Back with congrats

sara Etgen-Baker

March 6, 2026 at 9:59 PM

loss is hard but you've captured the lingering hope. well done

Andrea Dietrich

March 1, 2026 at 10:13 AM

Your writing here is very fine work , Eve. Thanks for your comments on my most recent post. I appreciate it

Jan Allison

February 28, 2026 at 4:43 PM

aww Eve, beautifully penned but sad my friend i know how much you miss your lovely Sonny and he has inspired your recent poems. I remember the fun times we had when he used to write silly poems with me hugs Jan xx