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Lingering Love

~ Aura ~ Surrounds the place Where a wedding was blessed Two souls shared their vows and their hearts A long life, joined dreams, love beyond measure Their presence lingers though their gone Magic of love prevails Glowing brightly ~ aura ~ Visual 1 Just Nine Lines contest 05/09/2013 Cecilia Macfarlane

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/12/2014 12:08:00 AM

re reading one of your golden oldies, sweetie. Are you a mom? Happy mothers day, though it is end of the day!!

Cecilia Macfarlane
Date: 5/13/2014 7:13:00 PM

Thank you Andrea, yes I have three sons. Happy belated Mothers day to you as well. xo

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/7/2013 6:47:00 PM

Hey, way to go. I see this one got the win it deserved. Congratulations.

Lucilla Carrillo

Date: 9/21/2013 12:39:00 PM

This is very beautiful for the contest. Thanks for sharing.... Lucilla

Tim Ryerson

Date: 9/15/2013 2:59:00 AM

Well, here you go AGAIN with another win! This has such a sad and melancholy feel about it...Beautifully done my friend! - Tim

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/13/2013 10:08:00 AM

Hello Beautiful Cecilia, congratulations...... always love LINDA

Skat A

Date: 9/12/2013 8:06:00 AM

It is beautiful...congrats! ~SKAT~

Kim Merryman

Date: 9/11/2013 8:33:00 PM

This paints a lovely picture, Cecilia! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim

Danesh Morgan

Date: 9/11/2013 8:05:00 PM

Congrats on your win. Morgan

Nette Onclaud

Date: 9/11/2013 6:00:00 AM

my heart beats for this sensitive piece, ces.. congrats on your great win.. do check my blog.. i mentioned you there..:) huggs

Sandra Adams

Date: 9/10/2013 8:13:00 PM

beautiful write...congrats on your win :)

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 9/10/2013 4:27:00 PM

My favorite so far! Congratulations.

Joseph May

Date: 9/10/2013 10:53:00 AM

wonderful write Cecillia...congrats on your win

Dan Kearley

Date: 9/6/2013 11:59:00 AM

Oh so loving. :o) And your trying a new form? Well, well.... Very nicely done! I really liked this. And thank you for your kind comments always. :o)

Honestly J.T.

Date: 9/5/2013 8:20:00 PM

Nicely done. It doesn't look like you were outside of your comfort zone

Cecilia Macfarlane
Date: 9/5/2013 8:34:00 PM

Thanks P.J. ....happy that you don't think so. Hugs

Poet Tacito

Date: 9/5/2013 7:58:00 PM

This was definitely beautiful. An injection of joy in your lines. Well done!

Cecilia Macfarlane
Date: 9/5/2013 8:32:00 PM

Thank you Drake. Hugs

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/5/2013 6:35:00 PM

oh my, I need to hurry and try this contest. Great model for me with yours.

Cecilia Macfarlane
Date: 9/5/2013 7:26:00 PM

That is quite a compliment, using mine as your model,,,thanks Hun. I was out of my comfort zone writing this, first attempt with this form.I'm sure yours will be amazing. XO

Joseph May

Date: 9/5/2013 2:52:00 PM

a lovely write Cecillia....best wishes

Eileen Manassian

Date: 9/5/2013 12:39:00 PM

:) Ceclia...I LOVED THIS! So beautiful! The aura does linger....HUGS!!! Good luck!

Pace Ink-U-Script

Date: 9/5/2013 9:21:00 AM

This is very beautiful...you painted a perfect picture!!!