Cecilia Macfarlane Poet Rictameter

Lingering Love

~ Aura ~
                     Surrounds the place
              Where a wedding was blessed
     Two souls shared their vows and their hearts
  A long life, joined dreams, love beyond measure
       Their presence lingers though their gone
                   Magic of love prevails
                       Glowing brightly      
                            ~ aura ~


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Just Nine Lines contest 
05/09/2013 
Cecilia Macfarlane

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Andrea Dietrich May 12, 2014 at 12:08 AM re reading one of your golden oldies, sweetie. Are you a mom? Happy mothers day, though it is end of the day!! Cecilia Macfarlane May 13, 2014 at 7:13 PM Thank you Andrea, yes I have three sons. Happy belated Mothers day to you as well. xo

Andrea Dietrich October 7, 2013 at 6:47 PM Hey, way to go. I see this one got the win it deserved. Congratulations.

Lucilla Carrillo September 21, 2013 at 12:39 PM This is very beautiful for the contest. Thanks for sharing.... Lucilla

Tim Ryerson September 15, 2013 at 2:59 AM Well, here you go AGAIN with another win! This has such a sad and melancholy feel about it...Beautifully done my friend! - Tim

Poet Destroyer A September 13, 2013 at 10:08 AM Hello Beautiful Cecilia, congratulations...... always love LINDA

Skat A September 12, 2013 at 8:06 AM It is beautiful...congrats! ~SKAT~

Kim Merryman September 11, 2013 at 8:33 PM This paints a lovely picture, Cecilia! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim

Danesh Morgan September 11, 2013 at 8:05 PM Congrats on your win. Morgan

Nette Onclaud September 11, 2013 at 6:00 AM my heart beats for this sensitive piece, ces.. congrats on your great win.. do check my blog.. i mentioned you there..:) huggs

Sandra Adams September 10, 2013 at 8:13 PM beautiful write...congrats on your win :)

Richard Lamoureux September 10, 2013 at 4:27 PM My favorite so far! Congratulations.

Joseph May September 10, 2013 at 10:53 AM wonderful write Cecillia...congrats on your win

Dan Kearley September 6, 2013 at 11:59 AM Oh so loving. :o) And your trying a new form? Well, well.... Very nicely done! I really liked this. And thank you for your kind comments always. :o)

Honestly J.T. September 5, 2013 at 8:20 PM Nicely done. It doesn't look like you were outside of your comfort zone Cecilia Macfarlane September 5, 2013 at 8:34 PM Thanks P.J. ....happy that you don't think so. Hugs

Poet Tacito September 5, 2013 at 7:58 PM This was definitely beautiful. An injection of joy in your lines. Well done! Cecilia Macfarlane September 5, 2013 at 8:32 PM Thank you Drake. Hugs

Andrea Dietrich September 5, 2013 at 6:35 PM oh my, I need to hurry and try this contest. Great model for me with yours. Cecilia Macfarlane September 5, 2013 at 7:26 PM That is quite a compliment, using mine as your model,,,thanks Hun. I was out of my comfort zone writing this, first attempt with this form.I'm sure yours will be amazing. XO

Joseph May September 5, 2013 at 2:52 PM a lovely write Cecillia....best wishes

Eileen Manassian September 5, 2013 at 12:39 PM :) Ceclia...I LOVED THIS! So beautiful! The aura does linger....HUGS!!! Good luck!

Pace Ink-U-Script September 5, 2013 at 9:21 AM This is very beautiful...you painted a perfect picture!!!