Lingering

The echos of your laughter linger
                            in the empty hallways of my mind,
                   It's been so long since you lost the ability to speak to me.
                        I can now only dwell on my memories 
                                            of how I made you laugh.
                     And though I grow weary of trying to read your mind.
                                 I still raise up each morning,
                                               Listening and waiting.
                                 It's been a decade now ,at least,
                                 and still I dream of our last fight,
                               Never physical was how we played it,
                                        but, the cerebal pain endures.
                                       A decade passed of silence,
                                 like the empty hallways of my mind
                 and the echos of your laughter,
                                    so fresh within my mind.
              I remember what they told me,I remember what they said..
                        If you survied the strokes- swelling in your head.
                                 You could someday say my name.
                                       Just to hear "I love you" -
                                        I still stay in this cruel silent game.
               But each night I escape to those empty hallways of my mind..
                       To linger in the laughter that echos from the walls.
                              And there I find some comfort- 
                                           there in those empty halls.


                                                                                 RJM 2011
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011


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Date: 3/3/2011 1:21:00 PM
Sad but very nice poem....Jimmy
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Date: 3/3/2011 10:21:00 AM
I am enjoying reading the many diverse poems written by the many wonderful poets writing and sharing here at PoetrySoup today. I am happy that yours was among the ones I had the pleasure to read RJM. Love, Carol
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