Lingering

The loves that lost or lingers on
to tempt fair heart with faintest song.

The small remnants of primal pain
that rise and rise over again.

Seeking so to immerse absorb
the core of oneness ego’s formed.

One is whole sum yet two can tear
many fine souls hold out in fear.

Loves reward when shared by two
teeters on a knifes edge of cold blue.

We hold hands with broken fingers
torn and grasping lovers linger.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 11/11/2009 6:42:00 PM
Beuatiful poem, Deb. Congratulations on your well deserved win. Love, Lainie
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Date: 11/11/2009 12:35:00 PM
Congrats on this amazing piece....How did I miss this the first time? Wonderful poetry, Debbie!
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Date: 11/11/2009 8:53:00 AM
Congratulations on your winning poetry. Love, Joyce
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Date: 11/11/2009 3:22:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Michael's contest Deborah. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/10/2009 9:33:00 PM
Your words flow like a river, gentle yet deep, to the soul of the reader. An excellent write, congratulations on your win. Smiles from Lolita
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Date: 11/10/2009 7:32:00 PM
Hi, Deborah! Congratulations on your third place in Michael Jordan's contest. Once again you have proven to be worthy of this honor! May you win many more! Love and hugs, Andrew.
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Date: 10/14/2009 4:26:00 AM
I find this write both intriguing and captivating. Very descriptive. Awesome write! Lightwalker
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Date: 9/15/2009 2:39:00 PM
if it didn't hurt would it be love?
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Date: 9/12/2009 4:34:00 PM
hold hands with broken fingers..........i can only imagine.Wonderful!
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Date: 9/9/2009 10:15:00 AM
good job with this write. I especially like the third stanza......
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Date: 9/9/2009 5:28:00 AM
Very emotionally charged. Sara
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Date: 9/9/2009 4:41:00 AM
One fine write you have here Deborah. You are an amazing writer. Thank you for your kind comments. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/8/2009 8:37:00 PM
Lovely couplets. Hope you're entering it in the couplet contest. Thanks for your congratulations. It was a surprise. Love, Joyce
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Date: 9/8/2009 4:57:00 PM
Another of your fine Couplets, Deborah! Enjoyed it. And thank you for your comments. Love, Gert
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Date: 9/8/2009 1:46:00 PM
Hi, Deborah! How are you doing today? I am enjoying another gorgeous day in New York City. I am reading your poem entitled, " Lingering " It is wonderfully penned with that poetic, unique touch. I am amazed by your inspiring poem...you know how to captivate a reader's interest! Good luck and keep on writing. Love and warm regards, Andrew.
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