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Linger

To linger in your arms is but a shadow of how you linger in my heart, for when you depart you steal a small piece of me, though you think I don't know, each time you leave I feel something missing inside of me, and like the flower that lingers in your hair your image lingers in my mind. Keep them. They are yours freely given by me. A token to be cherished to be caressed between your finger tips. Hold each one gently, they are fragile, they will break. How I wish our time together could linger in to eternity, where we could share each stolen moment and remember the joy of us together, and each golden smile that you give to me, but my one lingering regret is that each shining part of me that you have taken, each curious little trinket that is alluring to you will be stored in your heart and soon forgotten, and you will never allow me to linger in you.
12-26-16
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Dietrich Avatar
August 5, 2019 at 4:02 PM
So poignant. The ending is excellent too for this kind of poetry. A fave, my friend
Hamilton Avatar
January 18, 2017 at 10:13 AM
Forgot the seven
Hamilton Avatar
January 18, 2017 at 10:13 AM
This is just great James, sad but really well written,A7
Inman Avatar
January 18, 2017 at 10:29 AM
John, thanks for the visit and the nice comment.
Vinson Avatar
December 27, 2016 at 10:34 AM
James, it is a hard thing of which you speak, but you do it mighty well. : )
Inman Avatar
December 27, 2016 at 12:25 PM
Thanks Doug.
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