Lines That Are Not Meant To Be Crossed

No more lines,
The papers black,
the page is full,
so take yours back,
no more drama, 
no more pain,
and though the lines,
erased in vain, 
could not save,
her mortal soul,
her heart is now,
a big black hole,
consuming love,
and light alike,
her heart and soul,
shall always fight,
over her mind,
and body too,
don't let her heart,
capture you,
chase you down,
then wraped in chain,
you'll very slowly,
go insane,
the lines connect,
the web is strong,
your mind is weak,
and won't old long,
she wrapes you up,
in spider's silk,
as you grasp tight,
the dagger hilt,
the dagger is quick,
she now is dead,
the voices flow,
from your head,
the evil looks,
for some place new,
and you know,
its after you,
see it's course,
and run away,
out of dark,
be safe by day,
where water flows,
on dessert sand,
on common ground,
not common land,
they battle now, 
for spirits sake,
and leave ashes,
in the wake,
the sun and moon,
now watch and wait.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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October 10, 2013 at 5:18 PM
Jezabella, love the double impact winning poem... xox~ Linda
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October 5, 2013 at 8:39 PM
awesome win.......... love ~SKAT~
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March 15, 2011 at 5:11 PM
Wicked. - Lunessa Midnight
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January 8, 2011 at 12:21 PM
i like your rhyming. and i'm sure that you will like mine. JhLoving III
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September 7, 2010 at 2:38 PM
Welcome, I really enjoyed reading your poem. I would like to invite you to enter my contest called, A Fragmented Dream~~ just click contests, find my contest and read the instructions, if you have questions, contact me.. Constance
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September 7, 2010 at 5:01 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Jezabella. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. You can look to the left side of the main page and find lots of information on PoetrySoup including contests by members of PoetrySoup and contests by the PoetrySoup site also which you may enter.If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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September 6, 2010 at 12:31 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup... enjoyed reading your creative write.. hope your stay here will be a long one and u will check out the contest scene and enter.. good luck..with luv..
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September 6, 2010 at 2:11 AM
Great job! Good rhythm and rhyme too.
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September 5, 2010 at 8:02 PM
Well expressed thoughts and well penned, jezabella
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September 5, 2010 at 7:59 PM
I found your poem to be of a real quality good job i did really enjoy the flow of your knowledge through your words
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