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Lines On My Face

The words that I write flow from a deep place The lines I express mirror the lines on my face Some lines are joyful other lines took their toll Yes the lines on my face on the page reveal my soul I love my laugh lines they are my fast friends I can be a bit cheeky or sarcastic, it depends My love lines are softer around my eyes they reveal To the page when transferred they let you know how I feel Some lines are more tragic they are my battle scars I share lines on pages instead of drinking in bars Joyful, sad or happy each line expressed is true My expression as a writer I choose to gift to you Yes, all the lines scribed mirror the lines on my face They help me to navigate through my mind space Lines that reveal wisdom are not pretty that’s true They should be heeded please listen to them too Then choose to reveal some lines of your own I’ll see the lines on your face and know that I’m not alone!

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Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 5/12/2020 5:56:00 AM

I'm glad you gifted us with your lines of Grace, lovely xo

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/12/2020 7:57:00 AM

You are sweet.

Jcb Brul

Date: 4/15/2020 10:18:00 AM

Wow, those lines that spell your very soul! Excellent rendition!

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/15/2020 10:20:00 AM

Thanks JCB

Elaine Perrin

Date: 10/12/2019 10:20:00 AM

You’ve done it again! Another favourite for me. Absolutely love this beautiful and honest piece :-) x

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/12/2019 10:51:00 AM

Thanks Elaine, blessings Rick.

Vladislav Raven

Date: 9/12/2019 7:50:00 PM

Hi Richard, a beautiful way to express who you are, through the lines in your face. no matter what lines your poetry expresses, they are wonderful to behold, for your poetry is creative and excellent . This has to be a fav. Have a wonderful Friday. Hugs....Mike.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/13/2019 7:36:00 AM

You are kind, thanks Mike.

Frances Byrne

Date: 9/12/2019 8:41:00 AM

Hi Richard, That is so beautifully written, how wonderful to celebrate who you are, Lovely, Frances

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/12/2019 8:57:00 AM

Thanks Frances. The lines are increasing daily.

Panagiota Romios

Date: 8/30/2019 2:39:00 PM

Richard, I have commented on this earlier. But on reading it again... Have to FAV this extraordinary poem. I know you won't mind! Panagiota

Punnia Viswan Bhatia

Date: 8/28/2019 9:38:00 AM

Oh man!, I just love this one. Many many thanks!!!

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 8/28/2019 10:05:00 AM

This was a fun one to write.

Brenda Chiri

Date: 8/26/2019 7:39:00 AM

What a wonderful ways to explain lines on your face! Beautifully done and could I use some of those to explain the ones on mine? Lol! Loved it Rick!;)

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 8/26/2019 8:04:00 AM

Thanks Brenda, hugs Rick.

Jude Herrick

Date: 8/13/2019 5:15:00 AM

A very artistic Quatrain Richard!

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 8/26/2019 8:05:00 AM

Thanks Jude.

Suzanne Delaney

Date: 7/25/2019 3:48:00 PM

Nothing more beautiful than a kind and smiling face. Hugs, SuZ

Alexis Y.

Date: 7/22/2019 8:59:00 PM

WoW! Richard, What a deep yet relatable write. It had such depth but I see some of myself within your write. I think you just put "you" on a page. What I see is such a kind soul. Thanks for sharing such a write:-) Alexis

Rhona Mcferran

Date: 7/19/2019 10:23:00 PM

Our lines and "battle scars" are beautiful, because they remind us that we survived! This piece is fantastic, my friend... an instant FAV for me! ;)

Anisha Dutta

Date: 7/16/2019 12:50:00 AM

Enjoyed. But I think lines of wisdom are most pretty. Best Wishes always.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/16/2019 9:03:00 AM

Thanks Anisha.

Edlynn Nau

Date: 7/10/2019 4:30:00 PM

Nope! Not alone. Give me another year or two and my face will look like a World Map. I have mountains, valleys, deserts, and new softer places. Ahhh IF ONLY these could be replaced by GPS. Lol. Lot of living on this end too. Revealing my history and telling that I’ve lived by the lake or sea (too much of our star)! THIS WAS FUN!

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/10/2019 4:39:00 PM

Thanks Edlynn.

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 7/7/2019 4:09:00 PM

Every line on your face is special indeed..It reflects who you are..What you passed from..joy..sorrow..happiness....It reflects wisdom indeed to see beyond our own lines..I hope my lines will reflect warmth towards my friends.Loves this Rick.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/8/2019 3:08:00 PM

Thanks Charmaine, hugs Rick.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 7/2/2019 3:44:00 PM

Rick, this is brilliant writing my friend! You have painted the tapestry of life in this beautiful poem. I love the analogy and metaphors that are so accurately portrayed. This solid gold piece is going into my faves! Bravo! : ) xxoo

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/4/2019 8:16:00 AM

Thanks for the sweet comment. :0)

Vegter Papyrus

Date: 6/29/2019 11:20:00 AM

They do tell our story. They expose living conditions... Things that reside in our spirit. Some Real Talk, and GOOD!

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/4/2019 8:17:00 AM

Thanks Keith.

Panagiota Romios

Date: 6/28/2019 1:08:00 AM

Fantastic poetic honesty, so greatly appreciated by this poet!))) Panagiota

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/28/2019 8:21:00 AM

Thanks Panagiota.

Susan Ashley

Date: 6/23/2019 9:26:00 AM

Your emotions are so beautifully expressed in this riveting poem, Richard, and please know, that you are not alone. I loved this piece, a fav! Your poetic soul shines. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/23/2019 9:42:00 AM

Thanks Ashley. Hugs Rick.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/16/2019 11:14:00 AM

Believe me , we are not alone! Good one, Richard. I wish I could feel as grateful as you about the lines on my face!

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/16/2019 1:26:00 PM

Lines make people more interesting to look at. ;0)

Ralph Sergi

Date: 6/15/2019 8:14:00 AM

A sage narrative on an old-young man. Well done, Rick!

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/16/2019 1:26:00 PM

Thanks Ralph.

Eileen Manassian

Date: 6/15/2019 1:19:00 AM

So full of wisdom and beauty. I enjoyed this. I have a new poem up. Thanks for your visit to my older work.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/15/2019 8:12:00 AM

My pleasure Eileen.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 6/13/2019 2:58:00 PM

rich, each line on your face marks a breakthrough, a sad tale, and many a triumph in the seemingly wonderful journey of life... so beautifully rendered!...huggs

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/15/2019 8:10:00 AM

Thanks Nette, hugs Rick.

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 6/12/2019 1:18:00 PM

A poem of wisdom - each line giving away characteristics - enjoyed this true of life poem Richard - very well penned! Hugs, Jennifer.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/12/2019 1:19:00 PM

Thanks Jennifer, hugs Rick.

CayCay Jennings

Date: 6/11/2019 11:42:00 PM

I love your approach to this topic; it is lighthearted, delightful and engaging -- also uplifting. All the best ingredients in a poem that concerns aging. Bravo. All the best ... CayCay

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/12/2019 1:21:00 PM

Thanks for the sweet comment. Hugs Rick.