Lines For My Professor

not only a few times
had I sketched
the pattern of your smile
in every swaying leaf
in every waning moonlight
in every wandering clouds
blowing softly to the west

but I ,
I couldn't sketch
the pattern of the wonder
in your deep brown eyes
and the secret sigh
you gently cast away
when you asked me a question
and I answered  with conviction 


Rewritten this March 10, 2022
For "The Throwback Challenge Poetry Contest"
Sponsored by Natasha L Scragg
Judged--N/A

Notes: This poem was one of my earliest poems written in 1994. Written during our " Partnership and Corporation Law" class. My professor was a perfect model for an oil-on-canvas portrait. But instead of sketching him, this poem was born and it was followed by some little poems which where published in our university publication," The Democrat".

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Date: 4/9/2022 12:36:00 AM
This is exquisitely done "I couldn't sketch the pattern of the wonder in your deep brown eyes and the secret sigh"
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Date: 3/16/2022 5:26:00 AM
Love this!
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Date: 3/10/2022 10:55:00 AM
wow, so fantastic. An instant fave for me
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Date: 3/10/2022 9:55:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your poem and I thought it was quite well-written.
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Date: 3/10/2022 4:14:00 AM
During college days, teachers are our role models.... ! There will be one or two to whom we are intimately drawn and we have a tendency for hero worship. I can see your handsome professor with brown eyes who is impressed by the smart student in you !
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